fic: some things should be simple, even an end has a start

Sep 07, 2011 17:47

some things should be simple, even an end has a start
futbol rpf. cesc fabregas et all. (cesc/pique but barely ha)
the epic saga that is cescgate, from barcelona to london to barcelona again. plus a few stupid texts, sacrilegious slogans, a couple of punches and more references to peter pan than are necessary. 8,078 words (lies).


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fic, (cesc) let me play!, rpf: one step closer to hell

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vintage_boom September 8 2011, 00:21:01 UTC

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brutalsong September 8 2011, 01:44:42 UTC
NO NO NOOOO THERE IS NO FABPERSIE HERE! NOPE.
YOU ALREADY BROKE MY HEART ONCE WOMAN! REMEMBER HOW MUCH I WAS CRYING LAST NIGHT?

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vintage_boom September 8 2011, 01:56:37 UTC
LISTEN, STANK FACE IKER, IDC WHAT YOU SAY, THAT WAS FABPERSIE.

"Say you're not leaving."

HOW IS THIS NOT A FABPERSIE MOMENT??
TELL ME. HOW.

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brutalsong September 8 2011, 02:19:26 UTC
IT'S FOR THE CLUB OK?
IT HAS NOTHING TO DO WITH THE PEOPLE! RVP IS HAPPY WITH HIS WIFE! CESC IS HAPPY WITH DERPA DERP!

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the_beanster September 8 2011, 01:17:48 UTC
Oh, this was an absolutely lovely fic. I adore the writing style and your cesc is perfect. Loved it.

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brutalsong September 8 2011, 01:43:23 UTC
cesc, in general, is kind of perfect (most times). but thanks so much for reading. glad you liked it :)

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ginevrawp September 8 2011, 01:20:41 UTC
YES YES YES I LOVE YOU

so one of the first things I learnt in my creative writing class (lol shut up it was mandatory for my major) was that when you find a theme and you stick to it and weave your story around it, there's no way it won't work.

WELL THAT'S A LIE. Because if you don't have a good story, if you don't make sweet, slow love to language then you get something that's adequate but dead. Cold.

And you found your theme in Peter Pan and then you went and did your research and added so many FEELINGS I just can't. possibly. let. you. know. how. much. I. love. this.

JADFKAKDJFAas

seriously, it's amazing. and it'syou entirely because I have no love for Barcelona or Arsenal or Pique or Cesc. Ok, you did mention Masche and Lio (omg my bbs) but the reason I loved this story is that it felt so thought out and adjkfaljkf

I just love you, ok?

ok.

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brutalsong September 8 2011, 01:41:56 UTC
:3

ugh remember that night i wouldnt shut up about peter pan? its just that jfc lio totally is peter pan and he got to just be and exist in neverland and the parallels were too obvious!

im so happy you read it, and actually liked it because i know these boys are MEH to you. and i understand. because arsenal was always meh to me but cesc why is he so adorable?

at least now i have this out of my system and my (failed) big bang can take over, yeah?

i love youuuuuu a million lfc keychains

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ginevrawp September 8 2011, 01:53:02 UTC
lio so totally is, like even biologically

it's not that they're MEH, it's just that.. they're not one of my otp's, they're not part of my clubs so i'm like... "it's all ok with you in fic, but kindly gtfo irl"

they don't give me feelings but this piece totally did because WOW.

I WANT THE FUTBOL/TSN XOVER TO TAKE OVER. I NEED IT IN MY LIFE. and spiderman can also take over because . yeah.

lol yess! i love you a million xabi autographs

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brutalsong September 8 2011, 02:48:19 UTC
yessss can we start talking about that now? i want to write write write more hipsters doing hipster stuff because shit got real and i have neglected that for way too long.

i love you a million patatas bravas

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luhv you dansaires September 8 2011, 03:20:07 UTC

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Re: luhv you brutalsong September 9 2011, 04:57:27 UTC
lio is peter pan ok? it is soooo perfect!

omigosh eric i have no words for how amazing you were to me. thank you for holding my hand and correcting my mistakes and basically being my human encyclopedia for all things awesome. thank you thank you thank you! all my fic is for you always and always.

whatever level of awesome this fic can have is all thanks to you :)

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brutalsong September 9 2011, 04:58:44 UTC
thank you for your kind words! baby dream team is such a weakness of mine, im so happy they get to play together now :)

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