Top Hat, Chapter 11: The Visitors

[brunette89]

Chapter 10: What If is here

please read/review!
_______________________________

The clock read 3 am when Alice glanced at it through groggy eyes. Someone was pounding on the front door and ringing the doorbell like it was his or her job. She groaned, trying to ignore it. It persisted and Alice threw her pillow over her head.

“Hatter… Hatter,” She

Comments

Excellent

[fantasyflowers]

I'm really looking forward to how you'll pull off Charlie as Hatter's father. Though in truth it shouldn't be too hard, they are both mad as a box of frogs.

Great chapter. You can never have too much fluff.

Re: Excellent

[brunette89]

THANKS!! that was my thought too. They're both nuts and they seem British, so it's possible.

That's my theory as well. Fluff abounding is always welcomed.

[diesa_j]

Sweet Pea Love the chapter,though I think I got a cavity from all the sweetness

[brunette89]

Thanks!! haha yeah... I don't know where all the sweetness came from but for whatever reason, I was feeling it. HA.

[sucrosesanction]

This was a cute chapter. ♥ Thanks for sharing.

[brunette89]

Thank YOU for reading!

[klcthebookworm]

Yeah, it could work. Just pull Carol aside, tell her Charlie hit his head and has a Don Quixote fixation. She'd buy it. :D

[brunette89]

AHAHAHAHA that's hilarious. Such a good idea.

[earsnwhiskers]

Awwwww!!! Love it! Please don't stop! When do we get a new chapter? Pweeeeze! :)

[brunette89]

hahahaha I'll work on it when I get the chance! I'm so glad you like it!

[brunette89]

New chapter posted... :)