Top Hat, Chapter 10: What If

[brunette89]

Chapter 9: Mother Doesn't Know Best is here

please read/review!
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“Alice, it’s your mother. The Plaza can’t book only three months in advance so I’m calling Terrace on the Park. We need to go dress shopping tomorrow! Love you!”

“Alice, it’s Mom. Terrace on the Park is booked until November. How do you feel about Central

Comments

[ankhsenet]

Very well done. I like the way you wrote this part of Hatter background. I also liked the way you had him handle Carol. Can't wait for the next chapter!

[brunette89]

Thank you!

[narrativeliving]

Drive-by icon love!

[narrativeliving]

hugs for Hatter!! I love how you write them, how they take care of each other. And Carol, oh Carol. What would we do without her!

[brunette89]

:) Thank you very much! I know, right? oy, Carol. Good news is, when you finally win her over, she's completely on your side.

[klcthebookworm]

“They were executed… part of the bribe to keep me loyal to the Queen.” Hatter held their clasped hands tightly against his knee, sitting on his right hand as if he still didn’t trust himself. “I got to watch.” Bribe or incentive? Yeesh, poor Hatter.

[brunette89]

Yup. He's a tough cookie. and your icon is exactly what he needs.

[sucrosesanction]

Cute little filler. Saaad for Hatter. And Carol is well played as a worrying mum. Looking forward to the next, as per usual. ♥

[brunette89]

:) <3

[ashmanda]

:D wonderful chapter! love the Hatter depth you've added!

and of course as always, Carol is a wonderful form of entertainment XD

keep up the good work! XD

[brunette89]

Thank you so much!! I love Hatter so much, so I want him to have everything!!

Thank you so much for reading! <3