This writing meme comes courtesy of firesign10, who tagged me. The gist: share seven lines from the seventh page of your WIP. And then tag seven other writers to do the same
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I'm not sure if I should be thrilled or horrified. :)
What constitutes a line, btw? The seventh page of the WIP I'm thinking of has several short paragraphs, which I thought were also lines. But you have fewer than seven paragraphs, but you seem to have eight lines. I am confused.
I'm forty four pages in - if you'd asked for further on in the fic you could have got some really juicy filth. Anyway, here are the last seven lines/paragraphs of page seven. I'll post it here if that's okay:
“One of them’s your age,” Harry pointed out.
“What, seriously? I thought it was the Cocky Boys, not the Cocky Old Farts.”
Harry laughed, and before he could stop himself Ray was laughing back. “You’re not bad for a cop,” Harry said. “Okay. Just so we’re clear, last time. You’re up for this?”
“I’m always up for it,” Ray smirked. “Okay. Lead on MacDuff - if I’m going to be camera man to the stars, you’d better show me where the hell my camera is.”
Harry nodded, and turned. “Okay. You’ll do. Tour bus is this way.”
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What constitutes a line, btw? The seventh page of the WIP I'm thinking of has several short paragraphs, which I thought were also lines. But you have fewer than seven paragraphs, but you seem to have eight lines. I am confused.
But that WIP sounds pretty awesome.
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You should definitely be horrified, btw. Actually, this is just an excuse for more Bucky snippets. ::grins::
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“One of them’s your age,” Harry pointed out.
“What, seriously? I thought it was the Cocky Boys, not the Cocky Old Farts.”
Harry laughed, and before he could stop himself Ray was laughing back. “You’re not bad for a cop,” Harry said. “Okay. Just so we’re clear, last time. You’re up for this?”
“I’m always up for it,” Ray smirked. “Okay. Lead on MacDuff - if I’m going to be camera man to the stars, you’d better show me where the hell my camera is.”
Harry nodded, and turned. “Okay. You’ll do. Tour bus is this way.”
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I like your snippet! Sounds like Ray is going undercover, which is always fun. 44 pages? Wow. That's awesome!
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