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May 14, 2009 20:20

Title: Memories
Author: dephi
Pairing: Pitego
Genre: Angst
Rating: PG - 13 for the angst
Disclaimer: Own the plot, not the characters
Summary: The promised they made should be fulfilled. Yet a person halted him right when he was about to proceed. Would he do it at last, or would he break the promise instead?
Notes: Beta by tegopii

chapter 5 )

g : angst, p : tegoshi yuya/yamashita tomohisa, r : pg-13, *multichapter

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ojholic May 14 2009, 14:12:56 UTC
nice fic! im quite intrigued..

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brown_cinnamon May 15 2009, 13:33:11 UTC
Thanks for reading and commenting ♥

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bennyaan May 14 2009, 14:18:47 UTC
update!
uwah, i'm so happy now!
today there are 2 updates from the stories I love <3
It's getting more and more complicated =~=
poor pi.. I can't imagine how tired was he at that time..
so that man that koyama mentioned earlier is Ryo! haha XD
I wonder how his reaction will be if he knows Miki was murdered..
thank you for updating, dear *mwach* <33
but!
Pi has a girlfriend?? or it's just his sister??
and!
where's the rabu2 part? *get killed* =P

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brown_cinnamon May 15 2009, 13:37:49 UTC
Alright, first of all, it's not Rina who was mentioned.
It's someone else dear to Pi, and whether she's his girlfriend or not, I cn say that she's not, but Yamapi well...cares about her so much?
Ryo has a connection with that girl, or so..
Promise I'll explain more later :)

The rabu rabu will come uhh, a bit later? I'm still building it.. Hopefully I can start conveying it on 3 chapters ahead ^^;;;

Thanks for reading and commenting anyway ♥

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nichiya May 14 2009, 15:52:24 UTC
yay update <33 the story is getting more interesting and twisted, what is ryo's plan?? all characters are still mysterious to me, so yeah good job dear! waiting for next chapter <33

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brown_cinnamon May 15 2009, 13:34:49 UTC
oh well, a lot.
More to be revealed later, I'm trying to make the story goes faster by a bit, since seriously, this story goes tooo slow.
Thanks for reading and commenting anyway :))

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eightroses May 15 2009, 03:35:51 UTC
angsty cliffhanger...
your stories are always so good, i don't know what else to say about them ;~; haha

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brown_cinnamon May 15 2009, 13:33:58 UTC
haha..
That could mean anything...
Thanks for reading and commenting ♥

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tonieboo0013 June 18 2009, 03:23:08 UTC
YAY for a storyline! This is looking so good; I hope you update it soon! I like how you're basing the story on an actual concept, rather than the "Tegoshi met Yamapi in a dark club. They were both drunk. Dot dot dot." I usually see. I sense a few curve balls in the future and it makes me happy! Thanks so much for writing this!

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brown_cinnamon June 18 2009, 23:35:08 UTC
Hehe... I tend to make such 'actual conceps' first before starting up with my stories. Though, I have one story which suits your description, uh... Bar and such, though it's a one-shot, lol, and slightly different in a way :p~

Thanks for reading and commenting. Not sure about updating, but I'll try ♥

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tonieboo0013 June 19 2009, 00:37:59 UTC
Okay, so we're all guilty of reading the smut. Lord knows I've come across a lot in a couple Fandoms. Yes, yes, they're fun to read (okay, a MAJOR guilty pleasure !) but I still like the good ol' storyline to stick to.

...*runs to read BC's smut*

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brown_cinnamon June 19 2009, 00:48:11 UTC
Muwahaha... I find no objection in that sentence. And hell, I've fallen to a deeper hole. I mean, I actually wrorte it? (and possibly, will still write it?) lol~
RPs corrupt my mind :p~

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