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brown_cinnamon

Memories [Chapter 4]

Apr 24, 2009 21:12

Title: Memories
Author: dephi
Pairing: Pitego
Genre: Angst
Rating: PG - 13 for the angst
Disclaimer: Own the plot, not the characters
Summary: The promised they made should be fulfilled. Yet a person halted him right when he was about to proceed. Would he do it at last, or would he break the promise instead?
Notes: Hi, I'm back *waves*. Oh, and there's ( Read more... )

g : angst, p : tegoshi yuya/yamashita tomohisa, r : pg-13, *multichapter

Comments 16

bennyaan April 24 2009, 15:03:45 UTC

first??

brown_cinnamon April 24 2009, 15:24:22 UTC

haha~
You are~
And I've just realized how cute your userpic is ♥

bennyaan April 24 2009, 16:23:29 UTC

yayyy XDDD
sorry I cant reply immediately, I had to move to a new house T_T
I was too excited when I read this and I had to read it once more XD
anyway, how many times did Pi sigh that day? 8D
and tegoshi, what do you want??
the image of him in 15sai no blues suddenly popped out of my head
when I read the tissue part XD
sorry that I don't read the ryopi extra sorry..I'm way too biased XP
thank you very much for updating and thanks,
you make me more proud of my userpic XD

brown_cinnamon April 27 2009, 02:27:45 UTC

And my reply comes way later than you....
Anyhow, new house? Cool~
I might move to a new one soon, but I don't want to D:
Ohhh, you like this? Glad. I personally think that this ugh... I don't know what word could describe my feeling best, but...unsatisfactory? It's been awhile since I write any fic, well other than RP-ing though, so I'm not satisfied by the way I write at all ><
Haha... Well...pi? I'm not sure? Numerous? More than 10? XD

It's alright about Ryopi part, since that was so...random :p
Thanks for reading and commenting ♥

eightroses April 24 2009, 23:10:32 UTC

lots of angst ;~;
great chapter!

brown_cinnamon April 27 2009, 02:28:59 UTC

I'm late T^T
Thanks for reading and commenting ♥

tegopii April 25 2009, 04:17:07 UTC

WIN.
Your writing is so amazing ♥♥
This story is just so intriguing, I really can't wait to read what happens next <3 thank you for updating! <3
I can't really comprehend how well you write, because I myself am not quite that good,
but if you're desperate, I'm always up for betaing. (Its easier to spot someone elses mistakes than your own, right?)

ryopi friendship! ♥

brown_cinnamon April 27 2009, 02:33:57 UTC

Really? Uhhh... It always takes me long to update these days DD:
It's just like...whenever I type a word/sentence/paragraph, I'll feel like 'ugh, this is bad', and I'll erase it, but at the end I'll be stuck and asfgdhfjgkh... I wonder what's wrong with me D:
But still, glad you like this because I didn't dare to re-read everything since I was afraid in case I'll spot something unsatisfactory again then it'll take forever to update D:

Oh,, are you willing to? ♥
I'm desperate, yeah XDD
Uh, sooo... When I'm done with my next chapter, where should I send it to? :3
And your writing is good! Really!

Ryopi friendshi indeed ♥
Thanks for reading and commenting ♥

tegopii April 27 2009, 02:59:49 UTC

send @ yossie@live.ca
if you have msn, you can add me too? lol!
thank you ! xD'
and I definitely know what you're talking about
that's half the reason maybe love hasn't been updated in such a llong time.

brown_cinnamon April 27 2009, 13:04:25 UTC

Added, I mean at msn.
Thank you so much ♥

Hahaha... Writing fic is fun, but hard at the same time.. D:

nichiya April 25 2009, 05:09:46 UTC

yay, update!! take ur time dear, no rush on updating <33

this is yes a short chapter but still well written as always, i always like ur detailed descriptions.

ekk what happened to rina?

brown_cinnamon April 27 2009, 02:36:19 UTC

Hahaha... Or rather, I elaborate way too much, until the story progresses slowly DD:
Oh well... ^^;;

Thanks for reading and commenting *hearts;
And well, Rina... Uhh... I don't know... Lol. Because really, I was just trying to portray the general idea. I think this is the first time I don't write in details :p

zxcvbnm109 April 25 2009, 12:13:09 UTC

umm...srry for not commenting on your last chapters, i've been catching up and i'm a newbie :)

anyways bck to the comment: this was a great chapter (as the others had been too)

and i'm an angst-loving person, so I love the angst!!! And yamapi just sighs so much, which I think personally, matches his cool-self...your writing style is so good, especially being all detailed and all! :)
thx 4 updating and:

please update it soon! :)

brown_cinnamon April 27 2009, 02:40:00 UTC

Not commenting is ok ♥
Although I have to admit that I'm such a commentwhore... :p

Oh well... Basically I was trying to imagine how the so-called cool yamapi will express his uh, mixed feeling, anger, annoyance, etc, and at the end I was stuck with sighing :p just say that I'm out of idea :p

Thanks for reading and commenting :))
I'm trying to update soon, well after I'm done with my other fics XD