Comments | brown_betty: Fic: Substitute for Praise

brown_betty

Fic: Substitute for Praise

Jul 13, 2006 14:26

So, apparently this is porn-week in Betty's lj. I know. I'm as surprised as you are.

Fic: Substitute for Praise
Fault of: Petronelle
Beta by: Petronelle
Warnings: Not just porny, also kinda creepy!
Summary: "Kon-- The Titans wanted to know when you would be coming back," says Superman, closing the window with more respect than the reproductions deserve.

( Substitute for Praise )

warning: content, character: tim drake, character: clark kent, writing: snippet, character: bruce wayne

Comments 30

cbpotts July 13 2006, 21:23:21 UTC

Oh, more creepy than porny, this bit...but very well done. A lot of sorrow here, which you captured well.

brown_betty July 14 2006, 03:41:08 UTC

Thank you. The story I wanted to tell was bigger than me, and I'm afraid this story suffered a bit as a consequence.

ficbyzee July 14 2006, 01:14:23 UTC

Eeeep. This is creepy and hot and perfect, and just--the way Bruce touches him. Eeep. I think I'm scared of you now.

brown_betty July 14 2006, 03:32:26 UTC

I scared myself! [cries]

hjcallipygian July 14 2006, 03:12:01 UTC

Dude.

brown_betty July 14 2006, 03:30:20 UTC

Um. Yeah. Not kidding about the creepy!

chevauchee July 14 2006, 03:52:13 UTC

Oh. Wow. *worships*

brown_betty July 16 2006, 02:29:03 UTC

Thank you!

wickedvirtue July 14 2006, 06:00:53 UTC

I really had to read that beginning, like, four times to finally GET it. But once I did... TIM. TIM.

That poor baby. You gonna keep on mistreating him, because I'd love to see the greater scope of this. So creep and yet so good!

brown_betty July 16 2006, 02:33:04 UTC

I'm still a little concerned that I was a bit too obscure. I may succomb to insecurity at some point and poll people to see how they read it. I'm glad you liked it. It was kind of an experiment in "how far will Tim go for 'Batman needs a Robin'?"