Silence (Haylan Sucasanna)

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Title: Silence
Universe: SHIELD CITY(prequel)
Possessiveness: Original fiction. Mine. *hugs it close*
Characters/Pairings: Haylan Sucasanna/Jason
Warnings: D/s. The advantage of an incubus/succubus/human main character is that the plot is porn
Rating: NC-17
Word count: c1820
Summary: “W-would you like to-“ Jason hadn’t even gotten the words out

Comments

[justmmy]

Idk why, but this line "depthless green eyes watching him with dusky, predatory lust"... totally rawkin the Becky voice XD

And yes. the sex is hot. very.

And I love But that knowledge didn’t stop him from wanting Haylan, just Haylan, Haylan and the sex, the home, the safety that came with him. Oh the sheer intimacy in that line. Looooove it.

I honestly didn't notice any repetition or monotonous vocabulary. So you get a banana sticker for that, too. <3

[brosedshield]

Wooohooo! I'm glad you liked it (and that any repetition got lost in the paragraphs. I HOPED they were, but you never know).

I love Jason and Haylan. There's a good deal messed up in what they are, but it's usually very hot along the way...

[justmmy]

*glees like a buffoon*
(.......do buffoons glee?)
I quite like them. I expect you to bring us more in the future. <3

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I hope buffoons can glee. It makes me happy. I SHALL bring you more. Gaaaaaar, editing, why do you do this to me?

[bloodrebel333]

Oh, hey, hot.

[brosedshield]

Yay thank you!