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Your Claws in Me

Dec 25, 2013 01:44

Title: Your Claws in Me
Author: broompeople
Characters: Sam Winchester, Dean Winchester
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Mild depictions of violence, a little blood and gore, AU Stanford-era canon divergence
Summary: Showing up on Sam's doorstep bloody and battered probably wasn’t the best way to break three years of silence.
Word Count: ~2000
Note: This is a gift ( Read more... )

Comments 7

harrigan December 25 2013, 14:18:04 UTC

What a lovely thing to wake up to Christmas morning! The dynamic between brothers felt exactly right to me! And I'm always a fan of h/c (either brother, both brothers...) when it serves a purpose. Nicely done!

broompeople January 2 2014, 00:51:45 UTC

Thank you! I'm happy you liked it ♥

madebyme_x December 25 2013, 21:45:55 UTC

What a wonderful gift on Christmas day - thank you so much, I loved every word!

There wasn't a single thing that I didn't adore about this; the h/c, the Stanford time setting and you the way you captured Dean's voice so well. His worry, anger and guilt over Sam's injury was spot on.

What really stood out for me was the perfect way you had the Winchesters say so much without them actually saying it. That was so in tune with their characters and the way communicate with each other, especially in this difficult time in their relationship.

The ending left me feeling warm inside and craving more brotherly moments like this. Thank you again for your gift, this was such a treat and I feel completely spoiled. Wishing you a happy holiday! Take care, :)

broompeople January 2 2014, 00:51:12 UTC

Sorry for taking so long to reply, I was out of town without internet.

I'm very happy you liked it! I know there probably wasn't quite as much hurt Sam as you might have liked, but I hope what was there sufficed. And when it comes to brother moments I always worry about writing them too schmaltzy or over the top so I'm pleased that you thought it was in character. :)

I had a great time writing this for you and I hope you had a great holiday ♥

madebyme_x January 2 2014, 11:12:14 UTC

This time of year is pretty hectic, right? It was lovely to hear from you and thanks again for the gift, I really did adore it and I loved seeing both boys a little banged up and taking care of each other! Thanks again :)

embroiderama December 26 2013, 04:17:40 UTC

This is great! I love the way they don't say very much and still make it clear how very much they love and have missed each other.

broompeople January 2 2014, 00:52:24 UTC

Aw, thank you. I'm glad that you enjoyed it ♥