The Brain vs The Heart - A Battle Royale

Nov 02, 2010 17:47


Chapter 8

Luke got off Reid’s lap and took the seat across from him, buckling up before swiveling his chair so he could face the doctor. He was grinning at Reid like a 12-year old girl.

“You’re looking at me like a dorky high school kid who just discovered the most popular boy in school has a crush on him.”

Luke nodded happily and bit his lower lip ( Read more... )

rating: r, fan fiction, !author|artist: broncotvgirl, luke/reid

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msmurph November 3 2010, 01:41:18 UTC
Lord that was rough! I sure hope you do fix it. Didn't see that coming.

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broncotvgirl November 3 2010, 01:56:46 UTC
yeah sorry....not feeling much love tonight after posting this chapter.
I blame Reid's brain....bad brain..bad...

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smoothlikebutta November 3 2010, 01:58:34 UTC
What?! I am so mad at Reid. He KNEW just how ashamed Luke was feeling and that was how he responded? Just to make Luke feel even worse?

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broncotvgirl November 3 2010, 02:04:29 UTC
not his finest moment but the man panicked. Trust me it has much more to do with his own stuff than Luke's. He will try and make it right

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rajncajn72 November 3 2010, 02:05:02 UTC
I do NOT understand how he went from this

In that moment Reid wanted to do serious bodily harm to Noah Mayer. Damn that idiot kid. How could he not see how magnificent Luke was, and treat him as such? His loss, my gain.

To THIS

“I want to get off this plane, go back to my house and go back to my life.”

All over a transplant scar? I mean, he was pissed at Noah for making Luke insecure, but then he turns around and does something worse?

WTH am I missing??

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broncotvgirl November 3 2010, 02:16:28 UTC
LOL... you will find out WTH you're missing at the beginning of the next chapter. Luke will not find out for.... well, longer than that.

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rajncajn72 November 3 2010, 02:22:51 UTC
Just doesn't make any sense because he was spending so much effort trying to reassure Luke only to turn around and act like a complete asshole and make it worse.

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broncotvgirl November 3 2010, 02:45:08 UTC
would it help if I sent you the first part of the next chapter????
see, can you tell how bad I feel???

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joliepinkyswear November 3 2010, 02:36:04 UTC
Damn. Damn. Damn. Seriously for a smart guy he's pretty dumb. I know you'll make this better.

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broncotvgirl November 3 2010, 02:45:54 UTC
Yep he is.....and yep I will, eventually....

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sheleabow November 3 2010, 03:14:36 UTC
Reid, WTH? Luke gets on a plane,practically sits in your lap the whole way with his lips on you. Tells you his biggest regret and You turn him down.All I can say is WTH? But,Broncotvgirl I know you will make it all better sooner or later.Right?....

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broncotvgirl November 3 2010, 03:49:45 UTC
Reid knows he messed up! He will try to fix it I promise...

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