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brokenroots

So Long It's Almost Two Chapters...

Sep 27, 2011 21:07

We Have a Situation
Word Count: 5,578
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Nico/Dani
Spoilers: References something from 1x11, but goes AU in the middle of 1x06.
Disclaimer: I don't own anything. I just break things.
Summary: She thinks he thinks everything is a situation. Trouble is, he's right. She just doesn't know it yet.
Author's Note: Long chapter again. It's ( Read more... )

nico careles, lindsay santino, necessary roughness, fanfiction, dani santino, terrence king, ray santino jr, we have a situation

Comments 22

bets_cyn September 28 2011, 03:21:21 UTC

Oh, Nico, you silly, silly man. Thoughtful but silly if you think she'll stay without you there. She never said she needed an escape from _everyone_... she just need a chance to breathe with you.

nicely done.
and you know I love the EVIL CLIFFHANGER
:-P

brokenroots September 28 2011, 03:32:13 UTC

He was very thoughtful... right up until she thought he was going to leave her.

Thanks. :)

Glad you enjoyed it. :)

bets_cyn September 28 2011, 03:50:16 UTC

:-)
Damn Broken X Chromosome Syndrome rearing its ugly head in a nice, thoughtful moment! :-)

brokenroots September 28 2011, 04:08:37 UTC

Unless, of course, it was Dani jumping to a conclusion.

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goodisrelative September 28 2011, 03:35:33 UTC

Exactly. as has been discussed before - awesome and CLASSIC TK. Dude really needs to THINK before he opens his mouth. Miz Jeannie. Always a pleasure to read her. :-)
The kids... good job. Jules, you rock always.

And Nico. Nico Nico Nico. One day you will give yourself AND DANI the credit you both deserve. Also? what is with the men and the Broken X Chromosome stupidity. She'll be gone in 30 seconds if you think of actually leaving her there on her own, you moron!

Excellent, as usual.

brokenroots September 28 2011, 04:07:31 UTC

Yep, classic TK. He does need to think before he speaks.

Jeanette/Miz Jeannie is awesome. I always say that, though.

The kids were hard to do under the circumstances, but I think it worked... mostly. Juliette is still awesome as well.

Nico... Well... He's Nico...

Thank you. :)

tennisnike September 28 2011, 16:39:23 UTC

He's not going to leave her there alone with her bad ankle?

So much covered in this chapter.

brokenroots September 28 2011, 22:38:59 UTC

I'll let the next chapter answer that one. :)

Thanks. It was very full. I had so much I needed to cover in those breakfast scenes...