Now for the Flashback/Action Sequence from the AU...

[brokenroots]

I so hate action sequences, but... I still seem to write them...

Comments

[bets_cyn]

HA HA. Dani insists on bandaging Careles.... is this going to be a theme for your stories :-) (sorry, could not resist that one)

Okay, this is action scene 2... I do not understand why you think you do not write them well. It is good... enough imagery to let the reader create their own pictures of the battle in their head. Those are my fav kind of scenes so, YOU SHALL WRITE MORE ACTION SCENES! :-P

[brokenroots]

No. There's no bandaging in a lot of my stories. It's just this one and Sit.

I don't like to write them. And my description is not usually up to action sequences, at least not to my standards.

You think so? This is just because you want me to finish that BN crossover, isn't it?

[bets_cyn]

*giggles* it's just a physical manifestation of Dani wanting to take care of Nico. :-)

Yes, I think so. And not ONLY because of the BN/NR xover. :-P Just mostly.

[brokenroots]

Yes. Well, and it's the one thing that this version of Dani could offer her "rescuer."

:P Hehe. Soon I'll be working on that again... Just one evil cliffhanger (evil is a relative term) to go in Sit, and...

[goodisrelative]

I concur with ET. Awesome job on the action scenes... you might not like them or how you write them but from the reader side... they are good.

[brokenroots]

Okay. Thank you. :)