Comments | brokenprism: (fanart) Porom

first_seventhe in brokenprism

(fanart) Porom

Jun 26, 2008 22:01

Fandom: FFIV: The After
Characters: Porom
Rating: G

This time I have a couple different things I tried. XD

( Pics and notes behind the cut! )

sketch(es), sketch(es): coloured, ffiv, porom, fanart

Comments 10

irish_ais June 27 2008, 02:23:19 UTC

I think you're definitely getting a lot better; I can show you some tips with hands, if you'd like? It's really the only thing I see that jumps out at me as a major issue.

first_seventhe June 27 2008, 02:37:43 UTC

I'll take any tips I can get. I didn't spend a lot of time on this hand, admittedly, but I do know it's something I can't do intuitively (like a facial expression).

irish_ais June 27 2008, 02:51:29 UTC

OKAY. TIME FOR JANA'S HAND MSPAINT TUTORIAL.

WHICH IS GOING TO BE KIND OF STRANGE. BEAR WITH ME.

irish_ais June 27 2008, 03:14:27 UTC

http://i169.photobucket.com/albums/u202/Yunalesca3/stuff/haaaands.jpg

Terrible tutorial is terrible! And probably not entirely accurate, but it's just what I've picked up on. I find that looking at my hand in a mirror and sketching it, or just looking straight at the hand really helps. Make Jeff pose, or sketch his hands while he's gaming or something.

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katmillia June 27 2008, 02:45:28 UTC

UM THIS ROCKS. I love that you can pull off ACTION POSES and she looks like she's caught between childhood and womanhood- which she is, so excellent work. :)

first_seventhe June 28 2008, 17:55:55 UTC

Aw, thanks XD I've been working on making my poses look more action-y and less flat, so yay!

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first_seventhe June 28 2008, 17:55:23 UTC

I TRIED, but apparently in re-outlining the second one I'd changed the positions JUST ENOUGH that it didn't line up. ._____. I was pissed.

shanaqui June 27 2008, 11:52:49 UTC

The second one is really nice. I like her hair!

first_seventhe June 28 2008, 17:56:14 UTC

Thanks! It took a while. XD