FFVIII: Yes (Rinoa, PG-13) || snippets

[first_seventhe]

Yes

Fandom: FFVIII
Characters/Pairings: Rinoa
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: ~3000

Notes: This is more of a concept-piece; I’m experimenting with ideas. It’s a collection of idea-snippets. There will be a couple of these. Please let me know what works and what doesn’t so I can refine it into the final piece I want.There is lots of meta in here

Comments

Nothing you haven't heard before, but...

[maxmizuhara_1]

...this is good stuff. You've got it good when it comes to keeping the reader interested. Good job.