The Great Big Disconnect, Chapter Three

[brokenmomentos]

Title: The Great Big Disconnect
Beta: pyroyale
Chapter: Chapter Three / ??
Pairing: ?
Rating: PG13
Genre: Drama
Warnings: Language,Drinking
Disclaimer: I own nothing aside from the plot.
Plot outline: After their fiery parting of ways, Kurosaki You thought he would never see his childhood sweetheart Satoru again. But when the now up and coming vocalist

Comments

[empath89]

please don't go all RL fact Nazi on me.
Guess it's a good thing that I don't know enough to care ;)

I absolutely adore the dialogue. It feels like real banter. Lines like this - “Ask me to put on a corset and I’ll murder you on the spot, I swear to god.” - make me love this fic so much.

[wandering_son]

I've got to agree; you've got a knack for banter.
I'm interested to see how you play the character of Satoru.

[pyroyale]

(You posted that quick!)

Yep, the dialogue and the banter is the real highpoint of this chapter.

[sakura_majikku]

i love how this is turning out :0

i have a feeling that theres more to satoru than he seems to be letting on...just intrigued to find out more D;

[shyone05]

Nice :) I have no problem with the RL facts- after all it is fiction; and it's your story, do with it as you please. Lord knows I've twisted enough timelines and facts into pretzels..... ^^;