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Sep 19, 2011 01:59

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brojan September 22 2011, 00:03:46 UTC
haha thanks again girl

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elizaberglund September 19 2011, 12:08:58 UTC
Oh bloody hell1 This is amasing liek Villa and xavi! I love it!

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brojan September 22 2011, 00:03:59 UTC
thank you, glad you liked it!

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brojan September 22 2011, 00:04:13 UTC
thank you so much!

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sillypiglets2 September 19 2011, 21:13:10 UTC
This is beautiful.

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brojan September 22 2011, 00:04:23 UTC
thank you!

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sparksfly7 September 20 2011, 01:38:29 UTC
This was just...beautiful. There just isn't enough Xavilla out there and you always write David so wonderfully and realistically and I love your stories.

how even if he wanted to promise he’ll never leave, he can’t, because even if he doesn’t want to, it’s not only his decision and Barcelona doesn’t have the loyalty to him that it does to Xavi, and to Leo and Andres and Puyi. Wants to explain that he can’t give that much of himself when there’s no guarantee he’ll get it back.

I can't even describe how this line just got to me. It describes exactly how I think David feels, and everybody just seems to see how he fit it so easily and they don't understand that he must be feeling this way because he's part of Barca but he isn't Barca the way Leo and Xavi and Andres and Carles are. You capture the essence of Barcelona so well <3

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brojan September 22 2011, 00:04:56 UTC
ahh thank you so much, what a wonderful comment! <3

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