title: there will be a day
pairing: david silva/sergio agüero; implied leo messi/david villa and past david silva/david villa
rating: r
words: ~1650
summary: sergio 'kun' agüero transfers to city and it all looks familiar to david silva.
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it's just the guilt and forever wakefulness of the weak / it's just you and me )
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I just love the mixture of symmetry and imbalance in all the different relationships, I love the hurtling inevitability of it all, I love the pace, the way the prose goes from long beautiful phrases one minute to gut-punching snippets the next. Love love love love it. Favourite line (if you twisted my arm):
Thinks, there will be a day I will seek less complicated men, less interesting men, lesser men. Thinks it always tastes the same, thrill and shame, bursting hope and wilting disappointment.
Also: ADAM ♥ ♥ ♥
Thank you for an amazing read!
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This is so powerful and beautiful.
Cheek pressed against Adam’s chest, rising and falling gently, he thinks of simple men.
;__; I love this line. I can't even describe why. It's the combination of seeking a small bit of comfort and the sadness that goes along wit it. (plus Adam <3_<3)
And the bit at the end between Messi and Silva; I'm glad he didn't say anything. The silence between them was perfect.
fdgkljdsf;gkljsdfgl;ksdfj This is soooo good <3_<3
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