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[brojan]

title: there will be a day
pairing: david silva/sergio agüero; implied leo messi/david villa and past david silva/david villa
rating: r
words: ~1650
summary: sergio 'kun' agüero transfers to city and it all looks familiar to david silva.

Comments

[brojan]

why thank you!

[justkisa]

this--it just breaks my heart but it's amazing, really seriously amazing.

[brojan]

thank you so much!

[ladytelemachus]

Oh wow, there are too, too many things I love about this to list, but I’m going to try anyway because this broke my heart in all the right ways.

I just love the mixture of symmetry and imbalance in all the different relationships, I love the hurtling inevitability of it all, I love the pace, the way the prose goes from long beautiful phrases one minute to gut-punching snippets the next. Love love love love it. Favourite line (if you twisted my arm):

Thinks, there will be a day I will seek less complicated men, less interesting men, lesser men. Thinks it always tastes the same, thrill and shame, bursting hope and wilting disappointment.

Also: ADAM ♥ ♥ ♥

Thank you for an amazing read!

[brojan]

thank you for reading and such a lovely comment!

[wh_mermaid]

oh

This is so powerful and beautiful.

Cheek pressed against Adam’s chest, rising and falling gently, he thinks of simple men.

;__; I love this line. I can't even describe why. It's the combination of seeking a small bit of comfort and the sadness that goes along wit it. (plus Adam <3_<3)

And the bit at the end between Messi and Silva; I'm glad he didn't say anything. The silence between them was perfect.

fdgkljdsf;gkljsdfgl;ksdfj This is soooo good <3_<3

[brojan]

thank you very much <3

[luxover]

sobbing on my couch while my dog looks on in confusion, but like nbd or anything

[brojan]

get it together lady