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FIC: "A Man Like Smoke" 1/1 (Hector/Achilles, Patroclus)

Apr 06, 2006 07:09

Title: "A Man Like Smoke" 1/1
Author: Brenda (azewewish)
Fandom: Troy/The Iliad
Featuring: Patroclus, Hector, Achilles
Rating: PG-13
Summary: 'Hold me not back, therefore, in the love you bear me, for you shall not move me.'Feedback: Love it ( Read more... )

achilles, hector, fps, troy, patroclus

Comments 37

urbanfae April 6 2006, 08:05:10 UTC

Oooh. Lovely.

azewewish May 2 2006, 08:50:59 UTC

Thank you SO much!!!! ♥

trust_n0_1 April 6 2006, 09:46:50 UTC

*shivers* This was exquisite. Haven't read such a powerful story in a long time.

azewewish May 2 2006, 08:51:41 UTC

Thank you so much!!! I had great source material. *g*

buhfly April 6 2006, 10:33:06 UTC

POOR PATROCLUS! *whine*

I like this. *pets it*

I also suck at feedback today. But very pretty.

azewewish May 2 2006, 08:52:21 UTC

You totally do not suck at FB. *cuddles*

Thanks for reading!!! Poor Patroclus, indeed.

moimoietmoi April 6 2006, 13:13:23 UTC

Beautiful story! And so well written.
I particularly loved this: They are poetry etched in moonlight.

azewewish May 2 2006, 08:52:44 UTC

Thank you so much!!!

I had great source material to work with.

the_stowaway April 6 2006, 14:36:16 UTC

Ow. This one's going to haunt me. Beautifully done.

azewewish May 2 2006, 08:53:15 UTC

Thanks, hon!!!! I had great source material to work with.