FIC: "The Better Man" 1/1 X-Men First Class (Erik/Charles) PG-13

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Title: "The Better Man" 1/1
Author: Brenda (azewewish)
Pairing: Charles Xavier/Erik Lehnsherr
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: All rights belong to Marvel Comics and Fox Studios, not me.
Summary: Erik cannot - will not - forget the true reason he's here. Any distraction, however tempting, could prove his undoing.
Notes: Written for starzangel1 for the 2012 Secret Mutant

Comments

[crow821]

Awww. A lovely little bit of cherik that just makes the day better.

[azewewish]

Thank you so much!!!!! I do love their very complicated relationship.

[lulabel]

Fabulous. A bit twisty and dark with so many volatile emotions. Such a heady brew!

[azewewish]

Thank you so much!!!! They are a crazy complicated couple, and I love that about them.

[ghostrunner7]

Hmmmm, yes, perfect.

[azewewish]

Thanks, hon!!!!

[dodger_sister]

Your Charles' voice hit me so hard, it was so spot on and what a great look at not only Erik's inner turmoil, but Charles' as well.

This was excellent.

[azewewish]

Thanks, babe!!! Charles is just so fascinating - I mean, he's so arrogant and smart and clueless all at once. No wonder Erik's so intrigued.

[ceitfianna]

Oh my, I love Charles' line about how he can never be fully trusted and the way you capture these two and their hurt and love.

[azewewish]

Thank you so much!!! That line is my favorite as well. :)

[ceitfianna]

It just captures him so well and gave me an aha moment of yes, and he knows it. I RP and write him as well, so I love reading someone else who gets him.