Over My Head (My Confessions)

[brittlovesher]

Over My Head (My Confessions)

Tagline: Everyone knows I'm in over my head and I don't know what to do to but to give my confessions.

Summary: When the pressures of being unable to conceive slowly derails their relationship, Arizona chooses to take a break. She heads to Africa to work as a missionary, saving lives of the tiny humans. Yet, little to

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[sekana84]

Oooh, posted so early ;)

I love this chapter. Especially the flashback. It's so gripping and heart breaking. I love that we are getting more information about what actually happened before and it makes you want to reread because it changes how you read the present time scenes before.
Awesome job, baby. You're the best.

[brittlovesher]

I guess you and I are certainly on our game with posting! Go us!

This chapter is definitely really revealing and it's like you said earlier, this story is very between the lines so I hope they see what we're getting at. Thanks for being so awesome with getting this back to me! :)

[ladyv85]

So happy to see this update!! This chapter was very gripping but the previous ones were too but this chapter is different. Callie is trying to deal with all these emotions that she is feeling while trying to be strong. You express angst and inner turmoil so amazingly. The flashback was such an eye opener and it was so heart breaking to see how Callie pushed Arizona away. And now I have a better understanding of how it was possible to keep the pregnancy from Callie. Just wow...you are doing an amazingly wonderful job with this fic!
Thanks for posting.

[brittlovesher]

Aw thank you so much!

Ahh, I just... there is nothing I can say but really, just thank you. It's people like you who keep me writing! :)

[brittlovesher]

Oh wow, you're phenomenally amazing.

Callie is definitely a very lost right now and she drinks away her pain and thinks that if she hurts Arizona just as badly as Arizona hurt her when she left then it will fix everything, but we now know that it's not the case. Perhaps Arizona should have tried harder but life happens that way, I suppose.

Bailey is definitely the biggest Calzona fan girl and I had to use her for this. I felt like she was the only one who Callie would respect and we see that she rises to the occasion and actually steps for Arizona and their baby. It is definitely a huge turning point in this story.

Also, thanks for your criticism! I am always looking for a way to make this story better and I will definitely see what I can do to make this reading experience more easier and pleasurable for you! I greatly appreciate your opinion! Thanks so much. :)

[brittlovesher]

Aww, don't be unhappy with me! *offers you a teddy* *then some candy* *then a baby* *then JCap* We are always off each others times, aren't we? Haha.

Aww you are so wonderful. Really. Thank you so much for reading this :) Bailey is definitely a fan girl, and I love her for that. And slowly we are beginning to piece the past and the present together and begin to truly understand what happened.

Thank you for being so awesome :)

[majincammy]

Ugh, my feelings.

One thing you can do so well is make me feel, like truly feel things while reading anything you write. Heartbreaking chapter, which seems to be a constant with this story. I love watching Callie process and how she gets a little help from her friends to push her in the right direction.

The flash back was such an eye opener. Teddy being so torn and now we know why. Arizona forced to process all that was said to her and believe it. I wonder if Callie even remembers, considering how drunk she was. :(

This story is just amazing. It always takes my breath away with how well you pull out the angst and emotion. Totally jealous, you know. :p

Keep up the amazing work, Bee.

[brittlovesher]

You know, I love making people feel, especially with writing. It is such a rush to know that my words can create feelings in someone, that I can make someone angry or sad or all of the above because of my words. It's super awesome. Super

The flashback is probably my favorite part in this entire story. Really. I love it so much. Only because we see that Arizona tried and Callie felt hurt and abandoned so she tried to hurt her back too. And it ultimately cost her the chance to be with her daughter.

You shouldn't be jealous because your stories are just as awesome, doll!

You're fantastic! Thanks for reading this and also for letting me shoot ideas off you :)