Finally here. It's amazing as usual, but now that the story is unfolding so so intense. This is going to be a long painful ride until the happy ever after, hmm? I love you, and I love this chapter
You are sweet. Hm, well you already know that answer. You're the fortunate one who pretty much knows this story as well as I do. I am glad you love the chapter! :) I also love you too!
Aww thanks for being understanding, life definitely gets in the way during the worst time possible.
This story is definitely intense and emotional. I definitely had to fight back the tears writing that scene in which Callie found out and the scene in the OR. Ugh, but it's rewarding in the end!
Thank you so much. Really, you don't know how much it means to me
What a whirlwind chapter! So much is happening and so many people breaking down. It's quite amazing how seamlessly you move from one persons emotions to another and then to another. The Derek, Meredith, Addison interactions are potent. Teddy and Callie are completely a mess. I liked Cristina here, I think you totally nailed her attitude.
Arizona's flat line, I think my heart dropped with Callie's. I certainly hope she doesn't die. It almost feels like you may be going that way with the last paragraph, since the baby seemed to have grounded Callie and brought new purpose to her, but I'm not sure I would ever forgive you if she dies!! ;)
I know you have a lot of stuff going on outside of the internet, but I'm selfish and want more and I want it quickly. :x I hope things simmer down for you (if that's what you want, of course). ;)
Looking forward to the next chapter and, because I just really have to say it, you are awesome (like awesomesauce with a side of awesome)!
I was really worried about this chapter, that perhaps I included too many characters and scene changes was too much but I am glad you did not think so! It's definitely interesting and it is why I wanted to introduce multiple pairings to this story such as MerDer and Addek, because symbolically they all represent at least one part of the Calzona relationship. But you'll see that later. :)
Ugh, I know. These Callie scenes are draining me but they are rewarding in the end, I promise!
Insane life is insane. The last few weeks of college are ending and everything is just, blah. But I'll get it all figured out and get my ducks in a row soon, hopefully!
OMG! This is a Beautiful and heartbreaking story. I can literally feel Callie's pain. It's very raw and intense. You are doing an awesome job with this story! When you're describing the deep pain Teddy and Callie are feeling, it's as if time stands still...amazing!
Happy for an update, you never fail to disappoint in your writing which BTW is utterly brilliant. I've loved and loathed this story from the start and it's still the same, I'm kind of thanking god now that Callie actually knows Arizona is back despite the fact that she is hovering on the edge of death and that she knows about the baby
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Oh you, you are always too sweet and you always make me smile with your thoughts.
Callie really is all over the place, she is feeling a lot of things but Callie is a very complex story and it really is going to come into play in these next few chapters when we break down exactly what she has been doing since Arizona's been gone. it seems to me Callie doesn't know what she wants Hmm hold onto that thought ;)
Like I said in an earlier reply, the goal was to always put in other characters like Derek and Meredith and the whole Derek/Addison thing, because they symbolize parts of Calzona's relationship. I love the fact that Derek/Arizona are slightly friends on the show & I love to portray that in my story.
I love the way that you think my dear, I love it quite very well. And I cannot say any more on the subject matter.
You know, the Calzona timeline is not as long as I am sure that you think it is. :) There's just a lot of exploration on Callie's part coming up. :)
Thanks so much for reading, it always means so much!
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This is going to be a long painful ride until the happy ever after, hmm?
I love you, and I love this chapter
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Hm, well you already know that answer. You're the fortunate one who pretty much knows this story as well as I do.
I am glad you love the chapter! :) I also love you too!
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Aww thanks for being understanding, life definitely gets in the way during the worst time possible.
This story is definitely intense and emotional. I definitely had to fight back the tears writing that scene in which Callie found out and the scene in the OR. Ugh, but it's rewarding in the end!
Thank you so much. Really, you don't know how much it means to me
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Arizona's flat line, I think my heart dropped with Callie's. I certainly hope she doesn't die. It almost feels like you may be going that way with the last paragraph, since the baby seemed to have grounded Callie and brought new purpose to her, but I'm not sure I would ever forgive you if she dies!! ;)
I know you have a lot of stuff going on outside of the internet, but I'm selfish and want more and I want it quickly. :x I hope things simmer down for you (if that's what you want, of course). ;)
Looking forward to the next chapter and, because I just really have to say it, you are awesome (like awesomesauce with a side of awesome)!
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I was really worried about this chapter, that perhaps I included too many characters and scene changes was too much but I am glad you did not think so! It's definitely interesting and it is why I wanted to introduce multiple pairings to this story such as MerDer and Addek, because symbolically they all represent at least one part of the Calzona relationship. But you'll see that later. :)
Ugh, I know. These Callie scenes are draining me but they are rewarding in the end, I promise!
Insane life is insane. The last few weeks of college are ending and everything is just, blah. But I'll get it all figured out and get my ducks in a row soon, hopefully!
Thanks for your sweet words! You are awesomer!
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Can't wait till thenwxt chapter.
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Thank you so much!
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Callie really is all over the place, she is feeling a lot of things but Callie is a very complex story and it really is going to come into play in these next few chapters when we break down exactly what she has been doing since Arizona's been gone. it seems to me Callie doesn't know what she wants Hmm hold onto that thought ;)
Like I said in an earlier reply, the goal was to always put in other characters like Derek and Meredith and the whole Derek/Addison thing, because they symbolize parts of Calzona's relationship. I love the fact that Derek/Arizona are slightly friends on the show & I love to portray that in my story.
I love the way that you think my dear, I love it quite very well. And I cannot say any more on the subject matter.
You know, the Calzona timeline is not as long as I am sure that you think it is. :) There's just a lot of exploration on Callie's part coming up. :)
Thanks so much for reading, it always means so much!
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