Comments | brit_columbia: FAKE First Year Together, A New Day (May) Chapter 44 PART ONE

brit_columbia

FAKE First Year Together, A New Day (May) Chapter 44 PART ONE

Jun 21, 2009 02:07

First the rating: Not worksafe! Don't click on the link until you're safely away from those who could fire you.

Second: the apology. Sorry, peacewish, I know I said three weeks at the most and it's been four. Looks like those tenterhooks probably fell off by themselves.

Third: A bit about what's going on with me nowadays. As you guys may or may not ( Read more... )

pizza, a new day, fake

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brit_columbia June 27 2009, 00:02:19 UTC

You know, the pizza scene was pure indulgence on my part. It didn't advance the plot any, but I sure had fun with it!

brit_columbia June 27 2009, 00:05:31 UTC

By the way, I'm not strong enough to commit to being a vegan! I'm already having serious cheese fantasies which I will have to deal with soon or else I'll almost certainly explode. However, I'm experimenting with certain vegan and raw foods in the interests of improving my health. Some of it's not bad!

OMG neengy_dot June 22 2009, 02:46:32 UTC

AH! I can almost picture Dee in his blues! Yummy! ^_^ I'm off to the next post for part 2! Wonderful as always!

-Neengy

shelley6441 June 22 2009, 16:53:51 UTC

What does TCM mean? Are you okay, or suffering from food allergies, or just wanting to shed a few pounds?

Forgive me if I'm being nosy.

*hugs tight*

brit_columbia June 26 2009, 17:23:15 UTC

Sorry S6441, I meant to get back to you sooner on this. I didn't think you were being nosy at all. TCM stands for Traditional Chinese Medicine. As far as I know, I don't have food allergies, but I have sensitivities. For example, when I eat lots of cow dairy, my face gets puffy. Now that I've stopped, my face looks better ( ... )

shelley6441 June 22 2009, 17:49:14 UTC

Wonderful chapter, but I'm worried about Abernathy's little vacation. Will he really be in Florida all that time?

Bikky always makes me laugh - and it's so funny how Dee always takes the bait. LOL!

Dee in uniform sounds so heavenly - and Ryo's reaction to him is so sweet, and besotted!

Thanks, Brit, off to Part 2

brit_columbia June 26 2009, 17:29:43 UTC

Ryo's worried about Abernathy's little vacation, too!

Dee and Bikky keep each other on their toes, and both secretly enjoy the adversarial nature of their relationship.

I think the thought of Dee in uniform seems to have awoken a lot of fantasies amongst my readers. That uniform makes a reappearance in part two, as I'm sure you've already discovered!

peacewish June 26 2009, 23:13:54 UTC

Hey, sorry I'm late! This was fabulous to read, emotional and touching in the appropriate parts, hot and sexy whenever Dee was on the scene. I kinda envy Ryo, because there's never been a man in my life that turned me on with every look and every word like the way Dee does for him. He's so lucky.

brit_columbia June 27 2009, 00:01:06 UTC

Hi Peacewish, welcome back. When I found the tenterhooks unoccupied and the empty glass of lemonade, I figured you'd gotten tired of waiting and gone off to do other things. You know, we ALL envy Ryo! I would conservatively estimate that 90 percent of the Fake fandom is in love with Dee Laytner. If real life men were nicer, hotter, and sweeter than they truly are, there wouldn't be a need for romance novels and movies. Thank you for all the great compliments! I hope you'll want to read the sequel, too.