A Double Heart for my Single One Ch 9 (and possibly 10)

[briochick]

*clears throat* Right now this is unbetad (as were my previous chapters) but it shouldn't be too bad. Still, consider it a first, or at best second draft. I'm not sure if this is going to be 9 and 10 or just 9.

When Buffy arrived at the library Scott was standing outside the doors. He look up at her for a moment, gracing her with a dazzling smile,

Comments

[a2zmom]

I like that Oz knows something is up; there's no way he wouldn't. I'm not convinced she could have ditched Faith quite that easily though.

[briochick]

ooooh, goood thought. I'm going to email the text to you. So, yeah, with email. I did think that Oz would notice things and know what's up. As for Faith...we should discuss this. You may well be right (but she is younger isn't she? And a year can make a pretty big difference). Also, I've already noticed a flaw; buffy falls in the kiddy pool but later she's only bloody, but not wet. I can't wait to see what you have to say, can't wait to improve this. :-D