Comments | bringing_words: LJ Idol Exhibit B: Week 2

bringing_words

LJ Idol Exhibit B: Week 2 - 'Na wa ooooo.'

May 28, 2013 08:21

I smelled him before I felt his breath behind my ear. Beer and some kind of aftershave.

'Hey, Tali.'
( There's a rude word. )

fiction, short story, lj idol

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bringing_words June 3 2013, 08:28:19 UTC

Haha, no, it's really not! He should probably work on his pick-up lines :D

I like happy endings ;)

kf4vkp May 28 2013, 00:40:19 UTC

That's such a cute story!

bringing_words June 3 2013, 08:29:38 UTC

:D Thank you!

sweeny_todd May 28 2013, 01:14:09 UTC

Love the end!! Live it!!!

bringing_words June 3 2013, 08:29:57 UTC

Haha, I'm so glad! Thank you :)

mezzogiorno May 28 2013, 13:31:13 UTC

That is adorable, awkward but sweet. And just the sort of thing I would end up saying.

bringing_words June 3 2013, 08:35:59 UTC

Haha, thank you :) Awkward was me, pretty much up until... oh, let's face it, I'm still awkward :D But I guess at least now I don't have to worry about dating!

fourzoas May 28 2013, 16:30:57 UTC

Smooth operator, that one! Great pacing!

bringing_words June 3 2013, 08:36:21 UTC

Haha, I'm sure he'd like to think so!

Thank you :)