Comments | brin_bailey: Hold Tight (PG-13, Dean/Jo)

brin_bailey

Hold Tight (PG-13, Dean/Jo)

Apr 04, 2008 20:06

Title: Hold Tight
Author: Brinny
Character/Pairing: Dean, Sam, Bobby and Jo. (Dean/Jo)
Rating: PG-13
Wordcount: 2,134
Notes: This can be read as a companion to "Throw the Light", but it works as a stand-alone, so if you haven't read the other fic, don't sweat it.

Dean smears grease-stained fingertips on the outside of his pockets and nods at Sam to ( Read more... )

character: bobby singer, pairing: dean/jo, character: dean winchester, character: sam winchester, fan fiction, fandom: supernatural, character: jo harvelle

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brin_bailey April 5 2008, 14:52:16 UTC

Thank you. :)

Hmm. I don't know if there's going to be more. Honestly, this totally started out as something unrelated to "Throw the Light" and after letting it stew for a bit, I noticed some similarities, and reworked it. Which is my longwinded way of saying I'll try, I guess. ;)

anonymous April 7 2008, 17:48:31 UTC

It seems like Dean is trying harder for Jo to love him more when he finds out she is married. Will there possibly be more? B/c I can see Jo leaving her husband for Dean (I would. haha)
Oh and the whole thing about her being at Bobby's for a while... her husband doesn't care??? I think i may read to far into things at times. lol well I would like to see more. I love the way that Dean gets all protective over Jo, not wanting her to leave and realizing what he was missing.
Really lovely writting style!

brin_bailey April 7 2008, 20:53:44 UTC

First off, Thanks!

Now, lessee...

Will there possibly be more? B/c I can see Jo leaving her husband for Dean

Chronologically, this one comes before Throw the Light. (Spoiler alert! In that one she's still married to her husband, but is having an affair with Dean.)

Oh and the whole thing about her being at Bobby's for a while... her husband doesn't care???

In this, Bobby's more of a father figure than anything. So, Jo visiting him every so often is pretty akin to her driving up to stay with her dad.

Hope that helped! And thanks again for the comment! :D

folie_lex April 9 2008, 01:05:32 UTC

Perfect!

I just, I love so many things about it I can't put them in words.

The imagery, the voices, the feelings and the emotions...
everything! Simpy beautiful!

And those little details like that Sam-Bobby exchange about the stove (which was brilliant and so Bobby and so Sam and actually my favourite part in the whole fic) that round up the fic and lifts it into the prementioned perfection on every level of fanfiction goodness!

brin_bailey April 9 2008, 01:45:15 UTC

*blushes* Thank you!

I'm really happy you liked all the Sam and Bobby stuff. This fic was so hard to categorize for me, because, yeah it's primarily Dean/Jo, but I wanted brotherly interactions and other bits. So, yes, glad that you thought it all tied together!

folie_lex April 9 2008, 20:03:50 UTC

"This fic was so hard to categorize for me"

It was the same for me and I'm just a reader!
Either way IMO it worked in every way so I would assure you, mission accompished.

zozo42 October 19 2011, 05:15:22 UTC

this was good in that really sad made me want to cry way.
but Dean just should've realised he wanted (needed) Jo before she gave up and went and got hitched