come (run to me) PG-13, Chloe/Oliver

Mar 12, 2008 00:39

Title: come (run to me)
Author: Brinny
Pairing: Chloe/Oliver (although, it's never explicitly stated as such)
Rating: PG-13
Wordcount: 335

Four times, she’s died. She’s lain down too-careful hands for family and friend and foe and she’s left with cold skin and darkened eyes and heavy limbs.

It never gets easier.

She’s seen heaven (in death) and hell (in ( Read more... )

character: oliver queen, fan fiction, pairing: chloe/oliver, fandom: smallville, character: chloe sullivan

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svgurl March 12 2008, 06:40:29 UTC
I really liked this fic! The descriptions were lovely and you captured the emotions just perfectly. I could feel her inner turmoil and his pain.

I can imagine that Chloe coming back from death would freak her out more than just a little bit.

I like Ollie not knowing what to say, especially since he's such a smooth talker usually. The last line was just perfect. That's really all he can do and in the end, that's really what she needs. Someone to love her.

Great work!

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brin_bailey March 14 2008, 03:43:08 UTC
Aww, thanks! :D

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joans23 March 12 2008, 13:07:18 UTC
I can't believe I'm going to say this, but it's nice reading some fic that isn't SPN for a change!
"the sky is too blue (there and perfect)" is my favourite bit.

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brin_bailey March 14 2008, 03:44:20 UTC
You know what? It was kinda fun writing fic that wasn't SPN. :)

And much thanks for the comment!

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daisybalance March 13 2008, 07:50:41 UTC
Wow. So poetic but evocative of rough edges - really great story!

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brin_bailey March 14 2008, 03:44:30 UTC
Thanks! :)

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freneticfloetry March 13 2008, 21:56:15 UTC
Wonderful. Beautifully sparse and yet so vivid, and you packed quite a punch into a short space.

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brin_bailey March 14 2008, 03:44:40 UTC
Thank you. :D

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sanaazzy March 30 2010, 09:39:23 UTC
This is really stunning! written so perfectly well.

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