Your Heartbeat Running Through Me [Onho] [Pg-13] [1/5]

[queen_anything]

Title: Your Heartbeat Running Through Me
Pairing: Onho [Tofuho]
Genre:Supernatural, Romance   Vampire!AU, Supernatural, Romance
Rating: NC-17 (Over all) [Language, Smut]
Disclaimer: I own nothing.
Betad By: luvzcappietau
Word Count: 4,056
Summary: Lee Jinki passes out at the sight of blood, so how did he end up with a guy who drinks it?

A/N: For yuki12341234! I'm sorry for

Comments

[queen_anything]

Spot for yuki12341234! <3

[yuki12341234]

YAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY MINEEE♥
This was definitely worth the wait ^O^ onew is perfect and just the way i imagined him-ordinary and scared hehe (I love ordinary jinki for some reason :DD)
kibum and them are so scary lolol but it's sexy X))
and minho, I can't really tell what he wants! Is he already in love with jinki?! X33333
& I'm so happy that you're making me a 5x fic ;~;

[queen_anything]

I'm so happy you approve of it all, dear! ;o; <3
You'll see what's up the next part ;)

I appreciate your comment!

[luvzcappietau]

I should get a spot girl *snapsfingers* XD

I'm just kidding XD You know I'll be heereee, you just need to say, 'okay I posted it! :D' XD

Alright, so yeah, you know, me and this fic, it's like, omg, gah.

GAH.

GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH.

Enough Gahsss!

This was *painfully* awesome. I feel like I smother you with too much compliments, but I can't *help* it xD

I is in loooooooooove, with Minho, one, but yeah, this whole story, even *Onew*. Seriously. I love Onew. XD

"Minho scratches the back of his head. “I'm sorry, I was just hungry earlier. It makes me a different person.” "

I need to pay attention XD

http://i272.photobucket.com/albums/jj178/heynickyy/SHINee%20GIFs/tumblr_ldkfwkDE101qzzb83o1_400.gif

[queen_anything]

& you're epic for making me fall in love with this plot idea :*

I looooove you and your amazingness ~ <3

[ontaejongminkey]

To tell you the truth bb, my heart is pounding with adrenaline and excitement all throughout. And, this is just the first chapter! I also lol'd at some points! Omg. The way you write had me glueing my eyes on my laptop's screen!

I am so in love with this!
Thank you so much for sharing and I can't wait for the next installments! :)

[queen_anything]

Ah! Your comment has made me sooo happy!! Thank you so much! ^o^ <3

[thpeekaboo]

omg! :D you posted a tofuho! ---must read--- XDD
spot spot first :3

[thpeekaboo]

omg i'm so so so so so so so so - i love this fic. XD like totally honestly. i feel like Jinki's so badly frightened, too badly and D: I feel kind of bad for him when I see him near to hyperventilating ;___; but it was really awesome throughout the fic, the beginning was quite cute and funny - till the end i was so engrossed in reading *___*

update soon please? 8D

[queen_anything]

Awwww ;o; You're much too kind!! Honestly, I'm so in love with this fic my self .. ^^;;

I will update next week, plan on it ;) <3

[thpeekaboo]

it's always great to see that an author loves her own works! ^_^ I'm not being kind ^//^;; i wanted to leave a much longer and better comment for you but D: ((isn't good in writing long ;___;))

wah, really? :D I'll look forward to it <3

[hahappyness]

normally, I wouldn't read vampire fanfics but I decided to give this a try and lsdkjfksdsdlf sldkfjaskdsldkf I want more *A* I can't wait for the next part

[queen_anything]

Normally I wouldn't /write/ a vampire fic XD I'm so glad you gave this a chance :)