Comments | brightillusions: NCIS Fic: Years of Chances

brightillusions

NCIS Fic: Years of Chances

Jul 28, 2006 23:11

Title: Years of Chances
Fandom: NCIS
Characters: Gibbs/Abby
Prompt: #61 Chance
Word Count: 1086
Rating: G
Summary: It takes years, but Gibbs falls for Abby.
Author's Notes: It's all in my head.
Beta: krabbypatty

( Abby's familiar face made him pause. )

100_situations, ncis fic, stories, gibbs/abby

Comments 4

afteriwake July 29 2006, 07:41:10 UTC

This entire fic was great. Loved the way it broke down their history together. But this part...this one made me laugh:

"Friends can have sex."

"Abby."

I know it wasn't supposed to be funny but it was! Great job, hun.

brightillusions July 30 2006, 04:39:28 UTC

It's funny because you can see Gibbs, giving her that eye and the look and Abby just being petulant.

Thank you thank you. this was fun. =)

wiccagirl24 July 29 2006, 09:19:42 UTC

One day his nemesis put a bullet in Kate's forehead and the whole world tripped and fell. As he tried to find Ari and protect Abby, in walked his past with red hair and a smile. And for a moment she captivated him. While he was remembering Paris, Abby took note of the chemistry.

This paragraph blew me away. Amazing.

And thanks for the image of Abby and Gibbs making out in a chair. Swoon.

brightillusions July 30 2006, 04:40:35 UTC

Thanks for pointing out the specific part you like, that always makes me smile.

Yeah because Abby would so do him in a chair. =)