This was brilliant! I love the way you dealt with the demon blood (bringing back Lenore was a stroke of genius) and the subtle touches of Jo's story were perfect. Thanks for an entertaining read.
Thank you! I didn't want Sam's detox to be *easy*: after all the build up it got in season four, it had to be a major thing. Lenore seemed like an obvious solution to me.
Just finished reading this on my Nook. I really like the a/u you've drawn here - Lenore with Sam was probably my favorite part, but the chapter starts with all the glimpses of everyone the Winchesters knew was awesome. I wasn't ready for it to be over!!! There are so many unanswered questions!!!!
*ponders*
My favorite line was probably when Lenore told Sam to treasure the pain because it meant he wasn't a monster. Also your Ellen voice was so perfect. Also I love how Dean used his experience in Hell to relate to Jo. Also I need to know what happens next.
*grabs shoulders and shakes you* WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!???!?!?
*grabs shoulders and shakes you* WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!???!?!?
Rocks fall, everyone dies.
No, I'm kidding :) I am working on the next part, I promise. I have a twist on the whole apocalypse thing which I really hope will work.
I like that line, too. For Sam, pain is what makes him a monster: that's what has motivated the worst things he's done (up to this point in canon). But I think it foreshadows some of what will happen next for him, too.
I'm so glad you liked the chapter intros! I thought people wouldn't read them :)
This was awesome, I uploaded it on my nook and took it on vacation and it kept me entertained... but gosh I want more like now. LOL Can't wait for the next installment. :)
I have a lot of the next part written but it's not finished yet. I have no intention of leaving you on the cliffhanger, though. I promise I will post more.
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I am working on the next installment! Haley has a more prominent role in the next story. Not sure about Missouri, yet.
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*ponders*
My favorite line was probably when Lenore told Sam to treasure the pain because it meant he wasn't a monster. Also your Ellen voice was so perfect. Also I love how Dean used his experience in Hell to relate to Jo. Also I need to know what happens next.
*grabs shoulders and shakes you* WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!???!?!?
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Rocks fall, everyone dies.
No, I'm kidding :) I am working on the next part, I promise. I have a twist on the whole apocalypse thing which I really hope will work.
I like that line, too. For Sam, pain is what makes him a monster: that's what has motivated the worst things he's done (up to this point in canon). But I think it foreshadows some of what will happen next for him, too.
I'm so glad you liked the chapter intros! I thought people wouldn't read them :)
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I'm not a fast writer, I'm afraid, but I *promise* I am working on the next part.
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Really nice plot with lots of twists and turns. Thank you!
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I have a lot of the next part written but it's not finished yet. I have no intention of leaving you on the cliffhanger, though. I promise I will post more.
Thanks for commenting :)
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