LotR fic: Ransom (11/12)

[brennanspeaks]

Title: Ransom
Chapter Title: Be All My Sins Remembered
Word Count: 5,800
Rating: T
Summary: As the son of a poor family in Harad, Hakim thought he knew what to expect out of life. But, when a stranger stumbles onto his land after escaping the Mountains of Shadow, he and his family see their lives upended.

Previous Chapters:
Chapter One: Old

Comments

[cairistiona7]

You know, I'm enjoying reading the reviews you're getting for this chapter on SoA *almost* as much as the chapter itself. *g* Almost

[brennanspeaks]

:) The comments *have* been great this time around. Though, I'm starting to wonder if I broke Rachel and UTfrog by repetitive application of cliffhangers.

Your reviews might be my favorite, though. I'm so glad you appreciated the resolution in this chapter. You're right that the part about Umbar was difficult to write, so I'm glad it was effective in context--that it paid off, so to speak.

Now that I have a whole eleven days between exams, I might even make some progress on my eleventy-one other WIPs!

[cairistiona7]

Though, I'm starting to wonder if I broke Rachel and UTfrog by repetitive application of cliffhangers.

Bwa ha ha! You may have. Kinda like metal stress fatigue... you keep bending it, it's gonna snap! *g*

Your reviews might be my favorite, though.Aw, well... my reviews here are sort of a continuation of my beta for you. All part of the service, ma'am

[brennanspeaks]

Yeah, I've never managed to get SoA to work with a file upload. I have to stick to cut and paste, even though you have to wait five minutes while the screen freezes and it thinks about it. Computers are weird.

*happily trots off to read your h/c fic*