fic: cold pluto

[breebree16]

Okay, I'm having a bit of a writer's dilemma. I have this story idea of a post-apocalyptic world, so to speak, a small group of people moving across a few states trying to find a suitable living space, or survivors, after a flu-like pandemic has wiped out most of the American/Canadian population. Think "The Stand" but (as of now) without the

Comments

[doylescordy]

I like it! I think the 2nd person you're using is fine so far. I'd stick to that instead of 1st person, imo.

[breebree16]

I'm glad you liked it! I don't do a lot in first person, and I thought if 2nd person failed, that would be my fall back.

[xdorkmuffinx]

So far so good! :)

[breebree16]

Thanks! :D

sorry for the late reply!

[sleepingwgods]

I definitely think the 2nd person works! :D Also, quite an interesting concept, and I love the character interactions. :)