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darth_firefly October 21 2011, 13:57:19 UTC
This was excellent - just plain, straight up excellent! Bittersweet and excellent. Fantastic work!

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bree_black October 21 2011, 20:23:49 UTC
Thanks so much!

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ullman79 October 21 2011, 14:32:55 UTC
Gorgeous piece of writing. Needless to say I enjoyed it. A lot. :)

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bree_black October 21 2011, 20:24:57 UTC
I'm so glad you did!

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bree_black October 21 2011, 20:25:23 UTC
Thanks so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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salty_catfish October 21 2011, 17:15:26 UTC
This was perfect. Just perfect.

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bree_black October 21 2011, 20:25:49 UTC
:D Thanks for saying so.

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westofthemoon1 October 21 2011, 21:04:44 UTC
Aw, I loved each of the little snapshots of their lives, and the way you framed it with the polaroid camera was very cool. Then I got the ending, and I was prepared for the bittersweet story of sacrifice and devotion to continue on track... and then you completely derailed it! Your conclusion was so understated and unexpected, it made me sit up and laugh out loud. Awesome!

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bree_black October 22 2011, 03:32:05 UTC

Thanks so much. My normal route is to go for the tragic ending, but I really wanted to try something different. I'm glad it worked for you!

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