Fic: Fatal Flaw

[breathless_dawn]

Title: Fatal Flaw
Author: breathless_dawn
Rating: R for violence and gore
Pairing: Axel/Kairi (much squinting required)
Disclaimer: Kingdom Hearts doesn't belong to me. I bow to the mouse and Square.
A/N: Weeeell...This did not turn out as I hoped. All of it just kind of turned out wrong, you know? Anyway... Herein lies some dark!Axel and violence. I

Comments

[hope_assassin]

I quite liked this one, actually. I can't see why you're as dissatisfied with it. ♥ I like the darker take on Axel's character very much. And I find Kairi's point of view a bit hypocritical in a sense, though it is only understandable that she'd view things like she does. After all, even the Hearless and Nobodies die, even though not in such a gruesome manner as humans die when killed. The fact their lives are brought to an abrupt halt does not change just because they don't bleed, but she doesn't care to think about that. xDDD;;

Anyway, brilliant fic. I adored it very much~! Looking forward to seeing more from this pairing and from you~! ♥ :3

[breathless_dawn]

I suppose it just didn't turn out like I wanted it to and that's why I was unhappy with it. Kairi went and twisted it all around lol.

Anyway, thank you so much for the comment. I think Kairi's life had always been very sheltered, and when she's suddenly thrust into this dangerous new place with Axel, who definitely doesn't have a halo hanging around anywhere, things would get turned around.

[breathless_dawn]

Glad you liked it. Thanks for letting me know! :)

[eternal_moonie]

Amazingly Awesome story!