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Fic: A Change in the Wind

Nov 30, 2007 20:43

Title: A Change in the Wind
Author: breathless_dawn
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: I bow to the mouse, no plunder taken
Pairing: J/E

A/N: The second installment of my drabble series started with Requiem. Much thanks and a plate of fresh chewy chocolate chip cookies for djarum99 for her wonderful beta. All errors are my own.

( Her skirts feel heavy against her legs, soaked and captured by the tide, and she wants to let the waves carry her away )

character: will, pairing: jack/elizabeth, potc, character: jack, character: elizabeth, fic, character: weatherby

Comments 8

djarum99 December 1 2007, 09:01:40 UTC

Beautiful work! I love the moments you've captured here. It's a great portrait of J/E - Jack is only "there" in one piece, but his presence is intense in the other three, as well.

Favorite line:

But then she remembers a gold-toothed smirk and eyes that hold the world, all that she hungers for - freedom and mystery and passion.

I really like the idea that her mother told her stories of Jack, and that her father comforted her by allowing her fascination with ships and the sea.

Brava, love ♥

breathless_dawn December 1 2007, 16:19:39 UTC

Thank you so much. I think that Jack is as much a constant presence in her life as Will and I try to express that.

That was one of my favourites as well, and the little bit you suggested made it perfect *g*

Thanks again for your feedback, love. I really appreciate it ♥

savvysparrowluv December 1 2007, 20:46:24 UTC

Breathtakingly beautiful, I loved this series of captured moments. Wonderfully written, I could read them again and again! :D Brava!

breathless_dawn December 1 2007, 20:52:03 UTC

I could read them again and again!

Thank you! One of the best compliments I could recieve :)

ditte3 December 3 2007, 11:01:39 UTC

It's a great story.I would like to read more soon.

breathless_dawn December 4 2007, 00:41:12 UTC

Thanks for the comment, love. There is still more to come, this series is not yet done :)

fried_flamingo December 19 2007, 01:28:55 UTC

These are just beautiful. Love the tiny snippets of little Elizabeth, entralled by tales of pirates.

The three years on drabble is so bitter sweet, very sad but at the same time very hopeful.

breathless_dawn December 19 2007, 02:10:25 UTC

Thank you! Excuse me for a moment while I *HaPpy DaNce*! It's not often that I get wonderful writers such as yourself commenting on my work :D

Anyway... *g*

Thanks again for the feedback, it means a lot. There's more to come with this series...when it is to come is a different story, but hopefully soon. ♥