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[cecism]

Title: I Gave You My Heart (This Christmas)
Author: cecism
Fandom: Private Practice
Characters: Cooper/Violet
Prompt: #27 - More than enough (Author's Choice) @ un_love_you
Word Count: 3740
Rating: PG
Disclamer: Not mine, never will be.
Author's Notes: After my last effort was too depressing, this one is strictly the opposite! And we all need Christmas fic, do we

Comments

[stop_theworld]

Awwww! I love Christmas stories, and this one was so sweet. I loved how in the first two, her day is brightened by Cooper even though they're not together. I especially love the first, because the details of her life with Alan are great- very specific, not that unusual, but you can see how she feels suffocated a little bit. And the phone message was adorable.

I really liked the way you revealed that they were together in the fourth one through discussing their tree. And aww, the mistletoe! Oh, Cooper! That was so cute. Also, I loved the glimpse of the other characters. You wrote them so well, especially Sam! Ha!

I LOVE how each section ends with "Merry Christmas, Violet," and then the last ends with "Merry Christmas, Cooper." I think it's a great way to show how Violet finally understands what she has, and is giving back to him.

[cecism]

Ohh, you're very sweet. ♥ Thank you so much!

I think it's a great way to show how Violet finally understands what she has, and is giving back to him.
Oh, I'm so glad someone picked up on that!

[katayla]

Aw. That was indeed nice and fluffy. I loved Cooper searching for the mistletoe and waiting for Violet to come to him! :)

[cecism]

Yep, we all need a bit of nice and fluffy this time of year. ;) Thanks!

[skunkchu]

ha, this is awesome.
great job at keeping them in character.
♥

[cecism]

Thanks, m'dear! ♥

[wickdstarcrunch]

Awwwe, adorable!

[cecism]

Thanks!

[lightsarefading]

Awwww! This was so adorable, I loved it.

[cecism]

Thanks, m'dear! Glad you enjoyed it.