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[breathedeep222]

Title:Touching And Kissing
Author: breathedeep222
Rating:Pg-13
Pairing:Brendon/Spencer
POV:Third Person.
Summary:Brendon and Spencer met at summer camp. Brendon and Spencer fell in love at summer camp. Spencer came home and ignored Brendon and lost his virginity to his girlfriend, all the while thinking of Brendon. This is that moment.
Disclaimer:No, I do not

Comments

[i_loove_to_rock]

I really like how you alternated between the past and present and suddenly, it was back in the present after the near past part (if that makes any sense to you and not just me >.<)

I liked how with the camp part, you developed how Brendon and Spencer got to be close instead of just jumping right in to them being romantic.

also, shame on Spencer for ignoring Brendon's calls. who in the world could ignore calls from bden? :(

[breathedeep222]

Yeah, I understand what you mean. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you!

[stabityanna911]

oh wow.
That made me smile
and I got two hours of sleep last night so few things can make me smile.
Any thoughts about continuing this?
<3<3<3
Love. It.

[breathedeep222]

Aww, I'm glad I can make you smile.

Your icon makes me smile...a lot lol.

And yeah, I have considered it, but I am like, the most unreliable writer on the planet, so don't get your hopes up lol.

[stabityanna911]

but your amazingness makes up for it love!