31 Plays in 31 Days, #23 - "Hanging"

Aug 23, 2016 09:00

And the completion of the scene where David moves into Freddy's apartment in my Frasier spinoff pilot! This is the last piece, after part one in Day #19 - Lucky Bear and yesterday's part two, Day #22 - Men of the Ivies. The parts probably could probably be a little more unified, but I like the overall direction. It does a good job of setting up the ( Read more... )

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londo August 23 2016, 22:38:55 UTC
There was a blank space where a joke should go:

DAVID
Well, I just took the gym on the corner, but now I prefer boxer briefs.

FREDDY
How's it going with the plan to grow up and become a fireman?

DAVID
You know perfectly well I'm related to too many arsonists on mom's side to ever pass the background check.

FREDDY
Yes, I suppose those sheep are black because of too much soot!

DAVID
These days I'm hoping to [literally anything but a fireman].

FREDDY
See, I’m getting to know you better already. Come on, we’re family and we hardly know each other. We should at least try to connect.

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