Merely Players script finished

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At last, I have completely edited and polished up the script for Merely Players. I confess I am still not totally satisfied with it. The edit took me a long time because I was stuck on not being happy with a couple of areas and wasn't quite sure how to fix them. There's still a place or two where it doesn't feel quite right to me. But at least it's

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[katiescarlett29]

Would you like me to submit a critique along with my highest praise? Because I suppose I could arrange for that... although it did blow me away in its awesomeness. Seriously, I laughed out loud. I *never* laugh out loud while reading things.