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brbsoulnomming

Parallel Part Three

May 29, 2011 01:27

( Sherlock hasn’t even gotten to Bart’s when he gets the text from John. )

!fandom: sherlock, fic, parallel, sherlock/john

Comments 5

tehomet May 30 2011, 17:14:49 UTC

This is so enjoyable!

Couple of small nitpicks, though: There was a mention of grade school in the previous chapter, which is an Americanism. And in this chapter, John says that he and Sherlock can't arrest Sam and Fiona, but they can of course make an arrest = a citizen's arrest.

brbsoulnomming May 31 2011, 00:51:29 UTC

XD Well, yes, there's that, but John meant officially.

angelshandprint June 1 2011, 02:44:05 UTC

I LOVE confused Sherlock in denial ♥

angelshandprint June 1 2011, 02:48:19 UTC

And jealousy. And in denial of being jealous xD

random_nexus June 18 2011, 04:52:26 UTC

So, so, so very well done! I have to set it aside and finish later or tomorrow, but it's SO HARD! You're spinning SUCH a good story here, on both tracks! Excellent writing, truly.