wicked fun

[brazilian_gleek]

Author note 1: based on glee_kink_meme prompt: Rachel/Quinn - "The two watch porn together. Take it in any direction you want, I just love the idea."
Author note 2: I own nothing.
nc-17

Comments

[darksyx]

It's kind of written like a movie script or a theatre play in some parts and take the reader out of the story. Like in these two sentences:

“Wait, don’t…let’s …watch a little bit…you did wait four hours for it and…I don’t know…I’ve never watched this kind of stuff…maybe it gets good.” Looking embarrassed but curious.

“…Ok…I mean I did wait and …I never watched any pornographic video neither…maybe it will be educational.” Turning red.

This thing aside the idea of Rachel and Quinn watching Wicked porn is amusing.

[brazilian_gleek]

Thank you for your review. That is something that bothered me too when writing it. It's common to do that when writing in portuguese, but when it's in english it just sounds kind of weird. I'm trying not to do that in the next fic I'm doing.

Re: !!

[brazilian_gleek]

Thanks!!

[miss_darkmoon]

“It’s two witches, one dumb blonde, one nerdy green one, they bitch a little, must want each other, when it’s starts to get good between then in comes this Fiyero guy and every thing gets screwed.”

LMAO, yes!! :D

And haha, this was just awesome XDDD

[brazilian_gleek]

thank you! So glad you liked it!!

[jay00789]

Hahaha! YESSSSSSS.

This was brilliant.

Loved it.

[brazilian_gleek]

thanks!!

[samdittrich]

The title is amazing! love it! and the idea is super HOT! I really like this fic! good job! keep it up! =)

[brazilian_gleek]

Thanks!! Glad you liked it!