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Esclave (Chapter 2/?)

Apr 17, 2011 10:53

Title: Esclave (Chapter 2/?)
Author: keeconk
Pairing: AriYama.
Rating: PG-13
Word count: 2,615
Disclaimer: None of these characters are mine and the story is solely fantasy, totally has nothing to do with the real life persons. Some facts, however, might be based on magazine translations.
Summary: It's the party, and Yamada started to realise that he wasn ( Read more... )

r: pg-13, c: inoo kei, g: hey!say!jump, p: ariyama, c: arioka daiki, c: yabu kota, !multi-chapter, *esclave, c: morimoto ryutaro

Comments 42

mistyamadarioka April 17 2011, 04:22:15 UTC

I have only one critical:

1. I WANT MORE!!

XD XD I really love this!, is the first time that someone thinks like me, Daiki is SEME!! I love Daiki Seme :3

keeconk April 17 2011, 04:25:19 UTC

LOL Mikan. I was like "Omg a critique!"

And yay!! I personally don't really mind who the seme is when it comes to AriYama, but Daiki needs to play the role more often I guess XD

azukin_notsumi April 17 2011, 04:35:29 UTC

I'll surelly became addicted to this ^^
no critiques at all!!

thanks so much!

keeconk April 17 2011, 06:59:46 UTC

Really? XD Awesome~

You are welcome!!! ❤

kuramujii April 17 2011, 04:37:27 UTC

He could feel his lips unconsciously curved into a smile when he found out that he still knew how to count, a feeling of happiness washing over him because he now could answer Daiki about his age. “I’m almost eighteen! A few weeks before my birthday” he exclaimed, gulping almost right away the moment he realised that he was misbehaving.
Bwahahaha XD funny Yamada

I'm in love with your series too <3 XD
can't wait to see the next chapter :D AriYama~

keeconk April 17 2011, 07:00:46 UTC

Awwwwww ❤❤
Glad that you're in love with it too ❤

I shall post the third chapter tomorrow :)))

jenaflint April 17 2011, 07:32:21 UTC

Write. Write. Wriiiiiiiiiiiiite. :))

keeconk April 17 2011, 07:49:41 UTC

Writing right now! XD

miika_daiscent April 17 2011, 08:07:11 UTC

Uwwawawa..
and I'm in love too!!! with this series!!lol
Daiki sneak in to the bathroom!!!fufufufu~ >w<
“Keep your name,” Daiki said. I don't know why my heart went doki-doki at this part.

Maybe Inoo was right, he thought. Yeah, inoo was right, indeed, yama-chan!><

And Ryutaro!!!
Huwwaaa~ *flails

and keep the "update-fast" record yooo~
^^

keeconk April 17 2011, 08:13:59 UTC

Sneaky Daiki is just sneaky xD

I'm still excited about this and let's see if I update it again tomorrow xD