[One-shot] A Simple Question

[keeconk]

Title: [One-shot] A Simple Question
Author: keeconk
Pairing: AriYama
Rating: NC-17
Word count: 6,810
Disclaimer: None of these characters are mine and the story is solely fantasy, totally has nothing to do with the real life persons. Some facts, however, might be based on magazine translations.
Summary: There is always a start for everything, and

Comments

[gigabytexx]

"the seventeen-year-old boy was mischievous enough to try them out and found it surprisingly funny that they fitted him perfectly."
.............underwear wanker? XDDDD

And wohooo 2nd smut I've read in my entire life lol. Well written too! I can actually imagine what they're doing in the story haha XD
Ariyama ftw *_____*

[keeconk]

I just had to put this underwear wanker tale in. It's like a must XD

Well written? LOL, why thank you!! I rarely write smut and it really did eating up my brain cells XD

Yay for AriYama!!! <3<3<3

[gigabytexx]

I forgot to comment that I really love the part when Yamada being so over possessive and snapping pencils, so I go back in here just to read again that part loooooooooooooool XDDD

/creeper

[keeconk]

You, creeper XD

[cherryberrylove]

be right back~
gonna flail and then read
:D

[keeconk]

LOL. Okay XD

[cherryberrylove]

wow. i took longer to finish read this than expected...
that wa- *dead*

[keeconk]

That was whaaaaatttt? XD

[jenaflint]

japan's aging population! HAHA.

[keeconk]

Just have to be said XD

[mr_rainyday]

lols finally finished.....It took me like 3 hours with one 30 min and other shorter pauses. I hate that I need to read sentences over and over again to check if I read right. OTL

HOWEVER. Yamada the underwear wanker didn't go unseen lololol XD
I love the way you write omg ♥ like even with this "can we kiss" -thing you made up a good plot. And and and OF COURSE YOU GUYS CAN TAKE TURNS. fuck yeahh. love how Yamada was all inexperienced <3

I likey I likey omg loving you forever master Kiki

[keeconk]

LOL. /pats. At least you finished reading it!! <3

Underwear wanker is a must, yes? >D
LOL, why thank you XD. I always try to come out with plot that is realistic, I'm glad that this one works for you XD. And yes >D there's nothing else that can work with them but taking turns. We wouldn't want them to kill each other to fight for dominant all the time, right? :P

I love you too, Kiki!Worthy XD

[mr_rainyday]

Oh, and I forgot to mention RYUTARO. Ryutaro cameo is a must too. LOL

YES! Besides, them taking turns actually works pairing wise, unlike with some other pairings. *cough*yamachii*cough**cough* They can have some varieties in their sexlife lolol XD ...wat

XD <3

[keeconk]

Ryutaro is my favourite for a cameo role XD

[shinobu_k]

"he wondered if he made it too obvious that he just got it up in the ass the night before." LOL.

You've no idea how much I love you for writing this. Why? Well, a few reasons:
1. There's almost 0 NC-17 of JUMP. And 99% of them are (almost) 18 now. SAD D:
2. I love them together (even if my OTP is Daikei :D)
3. Your narrative is really good, seriously. You keep the balance between interesting, sweet, hot, funny and sarcasm (<3 the end, Ryutaro being all old man, so adorable xd).
4. IC! I love how you portrait them.
5. JUMP NC-17+ No PWP+ Well written= -348

You know, you make my day everytime you post <33

[keeconk]

So many compliments and I don't know how to reply to this XD

And yes, I notice there is a lack of Non-PWP fanfictions in JUMP fandom lately. We certainly need more of that. (And I like DaiKei too)

Though I don't know what -348 means /fails

[shinobu_k]

I'd give you more compliments using my language, but that's all my bad english could manage XD

Well, I was trying to hit that if there's almost 0 NC-17, there's around -(random number) of good fics (and NC-17) like yours <3

[shinobu_k]

*hint XD