Expedition notes 4

[bratfarrar]

Expedition 4 (July 1) - Bone Cave A, Gum Wrappers

• One thing not mentioned so far is that it is *hot*. There’s a sticky heatwave going on, and the caves are pleasantly cool, even chilly in comparison
• .George brings the rabbit bundled inside the hoodie he’s planning to wear once inside; there are rabbit pellets when he shakes it out before putting it

Comments

[anonymous]

okay that's spooky - could be that I'm primed to be spooked, as I am a touch claustrophobic, but....

this is a fun way of conveying a story!

Mum from VT

[bratfarrar]

I'm glad you're enjoying it! It's a story I definitely want to tell, but I can't quite figure out how to do it in proper prose yet--have to figure out the full shape of it first, I think. The format seems to be working pretty well so far. ;)