Harry Potter Fic: Owned

[bratanimus]

Title: Owned
Word Count: 922
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None
Summary: You can’t own another person. But another person can own you. Set during Deathly Hallows.
Author’s Notes: This was written for the Love Hearts Challenge on MetamorFic_Moon. My Valentine’s Day prompt was “You’re Mine,” which became a meditation on the concept of ownership.
Genre: Gen/

Comments

[wildmagelet]

This is so lovely. It's very evocative and sets the scene perfectly. The whole thing is very quiet, if that makes sense. Everything leads on smoothly, with no abrupt interruptions, and it propels you straight into a dark, hushed room. I loved how Tonks it was to just make that announcement that they should get married and how Remus just accepted it straight away and kept on touching her. Which shows how far they've come, really. And the writing is beautiful.

[bratanimus]

Thank you! I'm very happy that the quiet, hushed tone conveyed. And that the change in their relationship was evident. Most of all, I really appreciate your thoughtful words about the writing. Thanks again. :D