Life's Crossroads

Jan 25, 2012 17:15


Title: Life’s Crossroads
Author: brassband777
Characters: John, Dean (22), Sam (18).
Scenario: teen!chester, spanking fic
Implement: hand
Summary: An AU variation on the fight between Sam and John before he went to Stanford.
Author's Notes: This was a challenge to myself to leave my comfort zone. Very different from my usual fluff and happy endings - ( Read more... )

brassband777, teen!chester, john spanks sam

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brassband777 January 27 2012, 17:07:17 UTC
Oh my, I'm speechless at your praise. I never in my wildest dreams ever thought a fic of mine would be described as 'phenomenal'. Thanks for your lovely comment :)
You're right, I have no personal experience of spanking whatsoever, so thanks for pointing that out - I just wanted to get across that the spanking was really really really bad. Hee hee.
Not sure when I'll write outside my comfort zone again....I'll have to wait for another idea like this to pop into my head.Hmm.
I'm quite happy for you to include this fic and any other of my spanking fics on your archive if you want to :)

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winchesterlove2 January 25 2012, 20:37:40 UTC
i am in tears.
i was fine reading through this and yeah my heart ached for the broken family and i felt most for John--not being able to fully express his sheer love and fear for his child.

that last section just broke the dam wide open.

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brassband777 January 27 2012, 16:50:51 UTC
Thanks so much for your comment - I'm really humbled by the fact that my fic has actually made people cry. I'm relieved that you felt for Jon, because I was scared that he'd come across aqs abusive. I actually wrote that last part first...I just loved the idea of John having to physically hold Dean up.

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capricorn86 January 25 2012, 20:58:19 UTC
*stands up and applauds*

You already know what I think, but I`ll say it again: AMAZING.
This is without a doubt the most powerful SPN fic I`ve ever read.

Oh, and you didn`t have to worry about posting this, believe me. But thank you for the shout-out, I`m glad my feedback pleased you. :D

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brassband777 January 27 2012, 16:58:57 UTC
No, I thank you! Without your encouragement, this would just have stayed happily in my laptop's memory and never have gotten posted. I really had no clue what other people would think of it. Hmm. I am totally flabbergasted that you view this as the most powerful spn fic you've read....i really don't know what to say....I'm totally overwhelmed by that praise! Thanks so much for agreeing to beta :D

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capricorn86 January 27 2012, 19:50:11 UTC
I`m very glad you did decide to post it.
Beta-ing for you was a pure pleasure, let me know anytime! ;) hehe

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brassband777 January 28 2012, 08:57:30 UTC
Your offer of beta'ing for me anytime really amused me....which will make sense to you when you've read the email I sent you yesterday...ha ha ha ;)

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trumansshell February 12 2012, 01:15:14 UTC
This story was phenomenal. You made me cry, which I guess is a good thing :)
Your ability to catch the feelings of the characters during this moment in time really touched my heart. Thank you so much for writing this. Shell

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sherylyn August 21 2018, 02:59:21 UTC
I'm still new to the fandom (but I'm finally caught up on eps, at least)... this just breaks my heart on every level. How deep the emotions go for all of them, and how very, very hard all of this must have been for them. Geeez. Makes me wanna have Cass time-travel me back so I can hug the stuffing out of Dean and Sam, especially, and also assure John that he needs to find a way to get along with Sam better. Great job!!

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