2011 Fic Exchange: Responsibility

[brassband777]

Title: Responsibility (2011 Christmas fic exchange) Part 3

Author: brassband777

Characters: John, Dean (15), Sam (11)

Original Prompt: #18 Sam is spanked for the first time by Dean for running away to the library or the store or any similarly outrageous fact (Ages: Dean 15, Sam 11)

Implement: hand

Summary: Sam doesn’t respond to Dean’s authority very

Comments

[capricorn86]

OK, so you already know I`m not really a fan of this pairing, but you just wrote this SO well

[brassband777]

Thanks for reading this even though you don't like this pairing :D I'm glad and relieved you think this worked - I wsn't sure that I hadn't gone too far into Dean's emotions and that readers wouldn't identify with it. Originally, the fic was going to be more balanced between the brothers, but it kind of insisted on leaning towards Dean when I was writing it and I felt compelled to go where it lead me.
Of course, I had to have the snuggles at the end. hee hee. I knew right from the beginning that Sam was gonna climb on Dean's knee after the spanking instead of running from him ;)

[capricorn86]

No, I think you covered/portrayed Dean`s emotions very well, and I personally didn`t mind that the fic was mostly from Dean`s POV, it felt natural. :) I think you write Dean very well, a quality I admire.

[cookielaura]

<3 <3 <3 <3 LOVED IT!

You got Dean's emotions down so well and that ending brought tears to my eyes! xo

[brassband777]

I'm really relieved you liked it. I was worried people wouldn't, because it's different to everything else I've written in some ways. I'm glad you think I portrayed Dean's emotions accurately :)

[atalantaj]

Aw, I really, really liked this. You did a good job of getting into all the characters' heads, and I thought it was interesting with John explaining to Dean how to spank Sam. I don't think I've ever read that in a fic with Dean's first time spanking Sam, but it definately made sense

[brassband777]

Thanks for reading and your lovely comment :D I totally agree that John wouldn't have put up with Sam's escape attempt, he would have just restrained and spanked, possibly adding extra swats for fighting in the first place.
The 'how to spank' scene wasn't consciously thought up, it just came to me as a natural extension of John giving Dean permission to spank Sam - I could see John wanting the job done properly and also, I felt that if Dean didn't have a formula to follow, that unless he was spanking when angry, he'd definitely be too lenient.
I might try writing more Dean spanks sam fics in the future :)

[brassband777]

Thanks for reading and your lovely comment :D I totally agree that John wouldn't have put up with Sam's escape attempt, he would have just restrained and spanked, possibly adding extra swats for fighting in the first place.
The 'how to spank' scene wasn't consciously thought up, it just came to me as a natural extension of John giving Dean permission to spank Sam - I could see John wanting the job done properly and also, I felt that if Dean didn't have a formula to follow, that unless he was spanking when angry, he'd definitely be too lenient.
I might try writing more Dean spanks sam fics in the future :)

[wise_old_crone]

beautifully orchestrated darling, thanks for this :-D