2011 Fic Exchange: Responsibility

[brassband777]

Title: Responsibility (2011 Christmas fic exchange) Part 1

Author: brassband777

Characters: John, Dean (15), Sam (11)

Original Prompt: #18 Sam is spanked for the first time by Dean for running away to the library or the store or any similarly outrageous fact (Ages: Dean 15, Sam 11)

Implement: hand

Summary: Sam doesn’t respond to Dean’s authority very

Comments

[capricorn86]

Oh wow, this was so great. Adored the scene in the forest with Dean and Sam training together, Dean is such an awesome big brother, and I loved the way he praised and instructed Sammy, as well as how clever he was in persuading Sam to train and not skip simply because John wasn`t here. (Also loved the idea of John staying hidden, watching the boys.. Loved picturing his faces as he listened to Sam, hehehe)

The scene between Dean and John where John instructs Dean in how to properly spank Sam.. wow. I couldn`t decide if I should be amused or shocked, really. It was a really great scene though! Very unique and interesting. I feel sorry for Dean, having to face physically disciplining his brother, and having his father telling him how.
Going to read part 2 now, loved this part. Great work (as always)

[brassband777]

Thanks :) I had to get in some brotherly moments (the training). Hee hee. And decided to bring John into the fic, because I wanted Dean to have permission to discipline, because didn't think he would otherwise. I don't really know where the instruction on how to spank came from, I just figured that left to his own devices, Dean would be too lenient.

[capricorn86]

I know what you mean. Bringing John into the fic in order to make him give Dean his permission to spank Sam was a wise choice. And I think John giving Dean the instructions made a lot of sense. It would leave John with a sense of security that his eldest would do a proper job. :)

[cookielaura]

Awww loved this! So adorable, and that last scene was brilliantly awkward! Off to read the next bit :)

[brassband777]

Thanks for reading! Yeah, I can just imagine how embarrassed Dean was during the spanking conversation, but also how troubled he would be knowing what his dad was asking him to do to his brother.

[wise_old_crone]

So, I actually cried in uni today.
I really needed that pick-me-up. Thank babe :-)

[brassband777]

You cried in uni? Are you okay? I hope so!
I'm glad that my fic helped to cheer you up :)

[wise_old_crone]

well, on the pro side I make other people suck less in comparison :-(

Life just sucks sometimes but I guess I'll be alright.

and thanks :-)