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Supernatural Fanfic Part 3

Aug 04, 2011 18:02

Title: The Spirit of Jack McCaine Part 3

Author: brassband777 Characters: Sam (10), Dean (14), John Scenario: My take on Dean’s first hunt. Story type: General, Weechesters! Summary: John takes Dean on his first hunt, but of course, Sam manages to get involved! Author's Notes/Warnings: No warnings, though spoilers for ‘A Very Supernatural ( Read more... )

john, dean, sam, weechester

Comments 13

dont_hate_me01 August 30 2011, 19:20:55 UTC

Loved it! Thanks for sharing.

brassband777 August 30 2011, 22:03:34 UTC

Thanks for reading. I'm glad you liked it!

borgmama1of5 August 30 2011, 20:45:27 UTC

Good casefic. You plotted the action out very well, I could see it in my mind's eye as I was reading.

I also liked the way you integrated Sam into the hunting, the backstory you gave about him 'overhearing' John, and the way John handled Sam at the end felt like it could have happened like that.

brassband777 August 30 2011, 22:04:48 UTC

Thank you for reading. I'm glad that you thought it was realistic!

winchesterlove2 October 19 2011, 14:37:05 UTC

idk if you post on ff.net...i read this either there or on Jet's page. all i remember is i loved it :D there is such great detail in this story and i was really engrossed and pulled into it!

brassband777 October 19 2011, 17:35:31 UTC

Thanks :) You must have read it over on fanfiction.net - I kinda class it as a general fic and not a discipline fic like my others that are posted here. Admittedly, this fic actually has a proper plot, unlike my usual offerings. Hee hee....

capricorn86 October 19 2011, 17:48:02 UTC

Oh wow this was just amazing. Not many SPN spanky fics deal with the boys actually being on a hunt, and this was done SO well and incredibly detailed. I admire you ( ... )

brassband777 October 19 2011, 18:02:20 UTC

Thank you so much for the lovely comments, Elisabeth - it means a lot to me, especially as this was my first ever fanfic (although 'Odds and Ends' was posted first because this needed a ton of editing) This wasn't written as a spanking fic, but as a general weechester one. I didn't start writing proper spanking fics until you inspired me with that fireworks scene request ;D This story did take a lot of work, because it actually had a proper plot and I needed to make sure any readers could follow the action without getting confused. Thanks for reading it - I do realise it's rather long!

capricorn86 October 19 2011, 22:10:11 UTC

You`re so welcome! :)
I think this is really amazing, particularly for being your first. And I can`t say how happy I am that my request inspired you to write spanking fics!

capricorn86 October 20 2011, 19:33:30 UTC

Oh, I think I forgot to say this, but: Mixing salt with Holy Water? GENIUS!!

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wise_old_crone October 27 2011, 23:40:40 UTC

Oh man, I can't believe this was your FIRST story ever. It's truly beyond awesome. I read it in one sitting, if it had been a book I'd say it is a page-turner, but as it's on the web... is it a fast-scroller? a bookmarker?

unlike you, I am as always lost for words... and yes, you have a new stalker. I am officially resigning from the real world and becoming a hermit... or maybe rather the invisible man living underground and mooching electricity off the city...

absolutely breathtaking story. If I had a hat I would tip it your way :-D

brassband777 October 29 2011, 09:07:08 UTC

Okay, I'm blushing at your praise! I'm really glad you enjoyed the story :D I don't know if other authors are like me, but I never have a clue how my stories are going to be received by others - I always just hope that at least some people will like them. I was glad to read that you are joining our fic exchange! The more the merrier! Hee hee...