Spin 3b

[brandywine421]

Um.  Yeah.  I'm not sure where this is going anymore.  Damned muses have gone wild.

Chapter One

Chapters 2 and 3a

Comments

[ashlified]

I think this is going in the right direction - I love Seth and Sandy being so understanding and letting Ryan do his thing. (Of course it makes for more angst, but we like that.) Kirsten is really feeling it and Sandy must be pissed off to no end to be a. slumming it in the days inn and b. not taking her calls.

And now..Kirsten possibly blaming Ryan for taking Sandy from her? No way. She did this herself. Le sigh. Don't worry, Brandy. Your muses are keeping me entertained!

[brandywine421]

Thanks, Ashlified. I'm not really sure what's going in Kirsten's mind right now, but hopefully she's pulling out of her little depression. Or something.

Sandy at the Days Inn...hee...

Glad you're still enjoying!

[famous99]

You entertained me! And wow has this gone in a different direction. Sandy's okay with Ryan moving out. And Kirsten blames Ryan for tearing their family apart. Very unexpected and yet it works. Awesome update.

[brandywine421]

I'm glad you were entertained!

I'm also really glad that you think it works, I was worried about Kirsten's pov but it's what flowed out when I tried to get into her head.

Thanks, famous99!

[60schic]

Uh oh. If this was Julie speaking, I would fear for horrible reprisals against Ryan. But it's Kirsten. A maybe not so mentally balanced Kirsten..and I am afraid...

[brandywine421]

She did get a little snippy there at the end, didn't she? I was just as surprised as you. Here I am trying to redeem her and she goes all dark! Bad Kiki!

Thanks, 60s Chic!

[60schic]

The turn in the fic may have been a surprise, but no one does dark as well as you. You've given our Keeks an edge. I will be waiting to see where your character leads you.

[helen_c]

Liking this a lot :)

I loved Seth's reaction to Ryan getting an appartment. Hee.

Also loved this line a lot, And she couldn’t act like nothing had changed. Ryan had left her, he’d fractured her family and he walked back in like nothing had happened.
Like he didn’t even care that his child had died.

because, really, it's not as if anyone ever asked Ryan how he felt after the loss of the baby.

Intriguing fic! Can't wait to see what happens next--I'm slightly worried about what the next talk between Kirsten and Ryan will be like, if she blames him for taking Sandy away from her.

[brandywine421]

Thanks, Helen! You know Seth would want to move in or at least use it as a place to take Summer.

I'm a little worried about Kirsten myself. She's a little...'off'.

[cheekymice]

I'm also liking the way you are taking this one too Brands!

[brandywine421]

Thanks, cheeky!

Any chance of Hero today?

[cheekymice]

Tweaking...(stupid cheeky can't leave it alone even though mel has beta-ed it!) posting very soon. ;)