fic - barback

Jan 02, 2009 00:07

fandom:  the oc
title:  barback
rating:  NC-17
disclaimer:  I don't own anything oc related.
author's notes:  Very AU.  Taylor/Ryan.  There are no Cohens in this story.  A tidbit of this was posted in 2008 but it has grown.

part 1/3

part 2/3 )

au, smut, crackfic, ryan/taylor, barback, fluff

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corsettes January 2 2009, 05:31:00 UTC
i really like this fic.
can't wait to read the conclusion!!

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beege22 January 2 2009, 05:49:51 UTC
Where to start? For something that's supposed to be a little bit of fun you've drawn a believable (within the soapy context) portrait of two people establishing a deeper connection after their initial physical attraction. As always there are lots of nice little touches; Taylor's worrying over her outfits that reflects her feelings about the relationship generally, the way Ryan's actions speak louder than his words and the way he opens up to her when bringing her to Reno (i.e: Letting her more fully into his life) turns out not to be a mistake.

There's a sort of subdued hopefulness to the feel of this that I really appreciated - despite the crackiness of the concept it feels real, somehow.

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60schic January 2 2009, 07:33:08 UTC
:)

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bicky40 January 2 2009, 09:12:07 UTC
:D

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english27 January 2 2009, 11:14:17 UTC
Really enjoying this, anything Ryan and Taylor is OK by me!.
Great update.

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